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10-09-05, 11:28 PM | #1 | ||||
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-Cezar- vs. Sin`cere
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10-09-05, 11:44 PM | #2 | |||
The Rise
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-check in-
g'luck... |
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10-10-05, 02:38 PM | #3 | ||||
The Truest TRUTH
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yea check....
ur goin to need it....lol......and drop on time too....
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10-10-05, 04:17 PM | #4 | |||
The Rise
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We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams blah...bored so i key'd mine up now |
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10-10-05, 07:12 PM | #5 | ||||
The Truest TRUTH
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Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death EXPLANATIONS..... Ok right like im right and at the same time talking bout directions "left" and Cezar, J(u)lius that i killed him with knives....julius cesar died from being knifed....and seeing death is his OM in his sig....kinda of a good explanation....lol....
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10-10-05, 07:20 PM | #6 | |||
The Rise
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i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple
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10-10-05, 07:38 PM | #7 | |||||||
The Original Half Ass King
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V/Cezar.............. for having the better bar...
Ps. You dont need to explain 2 lines with 4 lines. |
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10-11-05, 10:42 AM | #8 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams ^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death ^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point v/Sin'cere
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 10:45 AM | #9 | |||||||
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v/ sincere
slightly better, even though the explanation almost killed it cezar def jam lines arent effective in PL battles |
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10-11-05, 12:48 PM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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V/ - Cezar
both bars were pretty much as weak as each other..... but then Sin`Cere explained his, so it made it wacker |
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10-11-05, 02:20 PM | #11 | |||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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v/ sin`cere...dat def jam shit was super wack lol
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10-11-05, 04:56 PM | #12 | |||||||
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Pretty close...but honestly...I gotta give it to cezar
His one seemed to hit more as a punch. Sin 'cere was too technical......try to avoid explainin ya shit too.. V/Cezar |
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10-11-05, 05:00 PM | #13 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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^^^Ooh shit....I forgot i was still logged on that account..
it's me...just to let you know... |
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10-11-05, 06:30 PM | #14 | |||
The Rise
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hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count
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10-12-05, 01:39 PM | #15 | ||||||
The Truest TRUTH
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ohhh they arent????..... Quote:
aint this swaying????...ok then....Either count them or DQ....i think...if mimesis think so...cuz i do think this is swaying????
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