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View Poll Results: Defined vs Legend | |||
Legend | 0 | 0% | |
Defined | 5 | 100.00% | |
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10-13-05, 07:09 PM | #1 | |
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Defined vs Legend
IP: 4E09 BD1F
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10-13-05, 07:16 PM | #2 | |
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IP: CB92 3E24
Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 07:16 PM.
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10-13-05, 07:16 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 07:16 PM.
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10-13-05, 07:36 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
dont understand personals please dont vote.....and ONLY explained votes please
ill kick your mouth in to disable all your lectures killa??...sure..eyes blind bumbs on the texcture reflection alone believe worthlessness in mirror defined legend worth a 1000? must be new era your verse shows noobs the worse way to suck name yourself legend??...then why FL you duck believe in the Aftermath of your drop discretion? wonder why 50s eyes you allow as a protection aight so you as good as 50..yall see what i see? if shit was in a package...................................... ....................he would be the one to out box me
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10-13-05, 07:38 PM | #5 |
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IP: CB92 3E24
kids been defined as whack since da day of his birth
classified as the whackest to ever walk gods green earth i know this shit hurts,but can you deal with it cause you aint da type that can just chill wit it you get parinoid,like a crackhead ya cant stay sober call me a demon cause to you its like the world is over you look really cold like yo ass about to die could spit a hot rhyme but dont want ya to fry hyperthermia kick in,ya dead my work here is done next time pack more heat before going against legend son basic shit |
10-13-05, 07:41 PM | #6 |
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hott verse uppin on this right here ya heard me yo
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10-13-05, 07:46 PM | #7 |
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This was feedback posted for Defined
IP: 0A37 1872
nice shit defined but I ain't votin. just tryna get this little kid to battle me. thats my name hoe.
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10-13-05, 07:49 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
umm aight thanks....if you change your mind please vote cuz shit be slept on crazy here...and word get at him bout that
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10-13-05, 08:03 PM | #9 |
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IP: D21D CD74
Voted For: Defined
kids been defined as whack since da day of his birth classified as the whackest to ever walk gods green earth 2...set-up and punch bassically said the same exact thing,for real.And it was weak. i know this shit hurts,but can you deal with it cause you aint da type that can just chill wit it 2...weak. you get parinoid,like a crackhead ya cant stay sober call me a demon cause to you its like the world is over 1...self glorifing you look really cold like yo ass about to die could spit a hot rhyme but dont want ya to fry 1....played out. hyperthermia kick in,ya dead my work here is done next time pack more heat before going against legend son 1...self glorifing ill kick your mouth in to disable all your lectures killa??...sure..eyes blind bumbs on the texcture 4....decent. reflection alone believe worthlessness in mirror defined legend worth a 1000? must be new era 3....bah..boring. your verse shows noobs the worse way to suck name yourself legend??...then why FL you duck 3....aah...ok... believe in the Aftermath of your drop discretion? wonder why 50s eyes you allow as a protection 4...ok....... aight so you as good as 50..yall see what i see? if shit was in a package...................................... ....................he would be the one to out box me 6...yea..good bar. Ok...one-sided battle Legend..you need work. U repeated urself,had too many self glorifing lines,and had too many played things.Any 'rhyme hot lines are played..so try to be more creative.Dont self glorifing in battles.It's oK in a set-up or sumtin,but not in a punch.A battle is to clown the oppenent. Vote-Defined Drop a vote in the link below plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210976 |
10-13-05, 09:53 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
aighht uppin #1 for some good explained votes thanks
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10-14-05, 09:22 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
Voted For: Defined
yo man this battle was a pretty decent one Legend - this wasnt ur best battle, your structure was ok, flow was pretty decent, punches hit fairly hard but defined took that section, the structure was a bit stretched, you needa show more of ur vocab and wordplay skills... no hate.. defined - your verse was pretty hott man, nice structure, nice flow, good punches, vocab was nice, had some good wordplay n sum nice simple personals... nice battle overall - defined...no hate..
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10-14-05, 11:45 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
coo thanks uppin 2 for explained votes..................
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10-14-05, 03:08 PM | #13 | |
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aight uppin 3 for votes explainede...i will rtf ..
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10-14-05, 09:42 PM | #14 | |
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aight uppin again lets get these votes explained please
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10-14-05, 11:19 PM | #15 |
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IP: 8752 F263
Voted For: Defined
legend umm personals you could have done better structue was good rhyme scheme weak kindergarten shit work on ur vocab wordplay work on it didnt really like any of ur lines to be honest but hey everyone has good and bad days this was jsut a bad one keep sropping defined not feeling ur personals either like the blind man line good vocab work on ur woordplay but not abd both werent that great rtf or i will dq my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494 defined
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