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Theory 4 44.44%
common 5 55.56%
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Old 10-15-05, 05:28 PM   #1
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Old 10-15-05, 05:29 PM   #2
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common has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 05:29 PM.
 
Old 10-15-05, 05:32 PM   #3
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Old 10-15-05, 05:36 PM   #4
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checking the time..............................
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Old 10-15-05, 05:38 PM   #5
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Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
 
Old 10-15-05, 05:40 PM   #6
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My bad

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
 
Old 10-15-05, 05:44 PM   #7
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Common a.k.a Flash a.ka. Auspicious a.k.a Wack faggot who got banned around 6 times for biting, lmfao, your done...

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
 
Old 10-15-05, 05:45 PM   #8
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y'all both suck.............................................. .........
 
Old 10-15-05, 05:48 PM   #9
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Common a.k.a Flash a.ka. Auspicious a.k.a Wack faggot who got banned aruund 6 times for biting, lmfao, your done...

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause


^^ Is what it was suposed to look like, omfg @ spelling and shit, now i'm gonna lose cuz of it
 
Old 10-15-05, 06:36 PM   #10
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polzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Old 10-15-05, 06:50 PM   #11
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pollls............................................ ...
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Old 10-15-05, 06:50 PM   #12
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Voted For: common

Theory
Um i didnt get that, your rhymes were pretty basic, the rhyme scheme was horrible to me, your stucture was alright but you had nothin creative in there, barley any hard hittin personals and yet you had no creative wordplay to twist shit up, i suggest you learn more before you say all that garbage shit you said in your verse.

common
well I dont like how you bit the name, haha, and thats one thing he could used on you but ehh, your flow was good but i didnt really see much i seen some attempts but they werent so great, your punches need more define in them, explain better and twist them words even more, but for the fact that attempted better punches and what not you get my vote.

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Old 10-16-05, 12:36 PM   #13
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Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
^aight first bar,good wordplay formed into punch

Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
^uhm not really feelin this bar actually

You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
^uhm again the hot flash thing, good wordplay into punch though but same concept basically

Solid battle, good wordplay but using the hot flash concept twice kinda threw me off you know.
Could've been more creative, vocab was coo, flow was aight...solid...

common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
^hehe, good opener, coo wordplay and all

Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
^hmmmmmm just like with him i don't like this one...

When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
^LMAO, damn you killed it with this one...hahaha...

First line was cool, second kinda threw me off but man that last line was nice hehe. Vocab
was cool, got flow down and just overall good battle.
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Old 10-16-05, 12:42 PM   #14
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Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
6...good punch.
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
5....decent personal...
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
2..no...u using a hot flash line again?

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
5.....decent...
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
2...weak ass punch...wtf is this?
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
5...decent,but these type of lines are 'blah" now.

OK..
Theory...
U started off with 2 good lines.But that last one...u had already used a hot flash line as a opener..why use another one as a closer?Esspecially in short line battles.DOn't do that.
Common..
UR opener was decent...But the middle bar,that was fucking weak.It barely hit him as a punch.The 3rd bar ite...but sex lines,unless done creative, are blah

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Old 10-16-05, 01:51 PM   #15
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theory bad structure ok punches i dont think either of yoou came that good honestly but commons punches were better by far
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