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Drop Dead | 1 | 16.67% | |
Illist | 5 | 83.33% | |
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10-17-05, 01:13 AM | #1 | |
Guilty Of Chryme
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Illist vs Drop Dead
IP: 0825 899A
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8-10 lines No Crew Votes No Biting Regular Rules. Good luck, & drop dead. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-05 at 02:13 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
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10-17-05, 01:50 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 01:50 AM.
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10-17-05, 01:55 AM | #3 | |
Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense.. So much that, .......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g & its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session Yet he's new....... ....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards... ...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops |
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10-17-05, 02:07 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 2029 97B3
Drop Dead has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 02:07 AM.
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10-17-05, 02:10 AM | #5 |
New to RV
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IP: 2029 97B3
- Drop Dead -
..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest, Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’.. ..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages, Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’.. ..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs, Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’.. ..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob, Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’.. ..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame, Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’.. R.I.P |
10-17-05, 07:23 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Voted For: Illist
Illist This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced.. ..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants Decent.. Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense.. So much that, .......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense Cool.. So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g & its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony Pretty good.. Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session Yet he's new....... ....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section Coolness.. This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards... ...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops Haha. Good. Drop Dead ..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest, Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’.. Nah, man.. ..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages, Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’.. Forced as hell.. ..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs, Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’.. Played as hell.. ..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob, Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’.. Forced.. ..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame, Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’.. Barely decent.. Overall, Illist's verse was good. He ripped Drop Dead's name with some original shit. Good punches.. good wordplay.. just an overall pretty good verse. Drop Dead's verse was very forced. The wordplay didn't make sense some of the time (I lose shins?) and it just made for a not too good of verse.. So, in conclusion, I have to give my vote to Illist for the better overall verse. Vote - Illist Drop Dead, you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record. |
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10-17-05, 07:28 PM | #7 | |
Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
Voted For: Drop Dead
Drop Dead- Dope enough verse seems like you bit it... Lol i heard some of the lines before... Good flow and structure.. will nvm... take that back.. ok structure enough with the :';,.,' shit.. seriously it makes it so hard to read.... You didn't have many personals.. thats why it seems like a you bit it from someone... Anyways it was dope good job. Illist - First things first.. You went over 10 lines.... You had ok structure farely easy to read ... didn't make too much sense though.. hard to understand some things in that verse you had. nice multies thought that was a plus that i thought stood out the most... You both had good verses if you would have made more sense to it then you would have got it in my opioin V/DD |
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10-17-05, 07:37 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
^ What the fuck are you talking about? Illist had 10 lines. His set up sometimes took the punch to another line, but it still counts as one line. I do that shit quite a bit in my verses.
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10-17-05, 07:37 PM | #9 | |
Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
more sense, lol....
If you don't get the punches don't vote people... 1-1, uppin' |
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10-18-05, 02:33 AM | #10 |
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IP: BEFB 4EB5
Voted For: Illist
Drop Dead- You need to be more entertaining to your verse... i get bored after reading the first line and am like wtf this shit is lame... Illist... actually enjoyed reading your shit... liked some of the punches you threw inthere ... hit deciently... v/illist |
10-18-05, 11:39 AM | #11 |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Illist
This IS What I Think Illist This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced.. ..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants ....Was That A Play On His NAme Initails? If so .,..Nice !! Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense.. So much that, .......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense ..LOL This Wasnt A Good punch But Damn It MAde me laugh my ass offf So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g & its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony ryme was kinda off but You did ya Thang with the punch Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session Yet he's new....... ....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section ....Nice.... This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards... ...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops ....Damn Now That Was Nice... Drop Dead ..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest, Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’.. ....Kinda Weak.... ..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages, Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’.. .....Played And You Forcin Ya Rymes Man.. ..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs, Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’.. ....Good Concept ..>Weak Punch.. ..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob, Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’.. ....Again No Good Direct punch/.... ..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame, Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’.. ......Aii... Overall Man I Think That You had some nice concepts but Weak pucnhez bcuz you worded this worngly and you used some played lines man and you was forcin Yoself ..Let the punch ride if the person doesnt get it then damn them ..get what im sayin?.,.....Next time try wording it better and using deeper concepts Overall My Vote goes to Illist for at the most Being more original and throwin better punchez so my vote goes to Illist
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10-20-05, 12:20 AM | #12 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
Voted For: Illist
This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced.. ..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense.. So much that, .......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g & its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session Yet he's new....... ....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards... ...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops vs nuttin niether of you droped that good but illest at leaset had punches and wordplay....and other dude all you did was talk of guns this is text battling not freestyles leave guns out of of your verse...and work on punches personals wrodplay and everything else
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10-20-05, 12:47 AM | #13 | |
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: CE10 8C0C
Voted For: Illist
both had some dope drops but it seemed pretty even.....i really dont know who to vote for cuz it both were pretty good......so yeah ima feed on both then vote off my assumptions il-you had some sick punches in there also some good nameplay as well.........vocab was aiight not too much but its good...you worded you shit good.....nice personals and punches drop- you had some siick ass multis in there but you relied on them too much.....it threw off some of you flow....good name play but nothin to spectaculiar....vocab wasnt really there.....your punches werent hitting as hard but some were good...focus on dissing more than multi's v/illicit for harder punches and dissing drop dead more
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