Battle Rules:

8-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
Regular Rules.

Good luck, & drop dead.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-05 at 02:13 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 01:50 AM.

Drop Dead has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 02:07 AM.

- Drop Dead -

..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest,
Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’..
..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages,
Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’..
..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs,
Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’..
..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob,
Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’..
..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame,
Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’..

R.I.P

Voted For: Illist

Illist

This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
Decent..
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
Cool..
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
Pretty good..
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
Coolness..
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops
Haha. Good.

Drop Dead

..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest,
Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’..
Nah, man..
..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages,
Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’..
Forced as hell..
..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs,
Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’..
Played as hell..
..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob,
Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’..
Forced..
..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame,
Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’..
Barely decent..

Overall, Illist's verse was good. He ripped Drop Dead's name with some original shit. Good punches.. good wordplay.. just an overall pretty good verse. Drop Dead's verse was very forced. The wordplay didn't make sense some of the time (I lose shins?) and it just made for a not too good of verse.. So, in conclusion, I have to give my vote to Illist for the better overall verse.

Vote - Illist

Drop Dead, you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.

Voted For: Drop Dead

Drop Dead-
Dope enough verse seems like you bit it... Lol i heard some of the lines before... Good flow and structure.. will nvm... take that back.. ok structure enough with the :';,.,' shit.. seriously it makes it so hard to read.... You didn't have many personals.. thats why it seems like a you bit it from someone... Anyways it was dope good job.

Illist -
First things first.. You went over 10 lines.... You had ok structure farely easy to read ... didn't make too much sense though.. hard to understand some things in that verse you had. nice multies thought that was a plus that i thought stood out the most... You both had good verses if you would have made more sense to it then you would have got it in my opioin

V/DD

^ What the fuck are you talking about? Illist had 10 lines. His set up sometimes took the punch to another line, but it still counts as one line. I do that shit quite a bit in my verses.

more sense, lol....

If you don't get the punches don't vote people...

1-1, uppin'

Voted For: Illist

Drop Dead- You need to be more entertaining to your verse... i get bored after reading the first line and am like wtf this shit is lame...

Illist... actually enjoyed reading your shit... liked some of the punches you threw inthere ... hit deciently...

v/illist

Voted For: Illist

This IS What I Think

Illist
This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
....Was That A Play On His NAme Initails? If so .,..Nice !!
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
..LOL This Wasnt A Good punch But Damn It MAde me laugh my ass offf
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
ryme was kinda off but You did ya Thang with the punch
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
....Nice....
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops
....Damn Now That Was Nice...

Drop Dead
..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest,
Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’..
....Kinda Weak....
..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages,
Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’..
.....Played And You Forcin Ya Rymes Man..
..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs,
Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’..
....Good Concept ..>Weak Punch..
..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob,
Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’..
....Again No Good Direct punch/....
..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame,
Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’..
......Aii...

Overall Man I Think That You had some nice concepts but Weak pucnhez bcuz you worded this worngly and you used some played lines man and you was forcin Yoself ..Let the punch ride if the person doesnt get it then damn them ..get what im sayin?.,.....Next time try wording it better and using deeper concepts

Overall My Vote goes to Illist for at the most Being more original and throwin better punchez

so my vote goes to Illist

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Voted For: Illist

This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops

vs

nuttin

niether of you droped that good but illest at leaset had punches and wordplay....and other dude all you did was talk of guns this is text battling not freestyles leave guns out of of your verse...and work on punches personals wrodplay and everything else

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