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12-19-05, 03:25 AM | #1 | |||||||
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9. DaTrusHurtz vs. 56. Aimez
IP: F019 583F
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Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time. 10 Lines. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. Good Luck.. Come Dope. Last edited by Red Bull : 12-19-05 at 03:37 AM. |
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12-19-05, 12:32 PM | #2 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: D73A CB8F
Sorry this tourney isn't going to last long for you
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12-19-05, 05:21 PM | #3 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 28AD 5545
Wow I Hate Cockiness .....Must Be Why Im Smashin All These Pussies Like You
Checkin In-
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12-21-05, 11:14 AM | #4 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo
I See This Dude Is From "Rockville" So You Know He Bout To Get "Stoned" He Swore He Was "Hard" Till He Went To Prison And He "Caught A Bone" You'll Starve For Wins While The Rest Of RV Feeds Off Of Your Losses I'll Be Takin The "W'"z So That "I" Can See This "N"igga Was Costless Oops I Just Made His Mouth Drop Like When I Pulled out My Dick They Say Im The "Magacian" The Way I Just "Call Out These Tricks" Wow Dude Where's Your Life Your 20 Yrs Old and Your On RV? Damn I Always Knew That This "Ava" Character Couldnt Be "Archy" Stay "Focus" Mayne Or Else You Might Be Lookin "Ford" To Defeat You Trying To "Buy Some Pussy" When You Cant "Afford The Feet" -Waitin-
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12-21-05, 03:41 PM | #5 | |||||
Blow Me
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
Lmao...............
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12-23-05, 02:11 PM | #6 | ||||
I Hurt.
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IP: D73A CB8F
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Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin That I use AIM all the time... ... when I want an easy win So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you Ya writing is garbage n' quoted wordplay is madness But I see your the topical leader... ... when it comes to wackness Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches I filled a verse with personals... ... like what ya need to find ANY bitches |
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12-23-05, 02:32 PM | #7 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
I See This Dude Is From "Rockville" So You Know He Bout To Get "Stoned"
He Swore He Was "Hard" Till He Went To Prison And He "Caught A Bone" ^^^Weak opener You'll Starve For Wins While The Rest Of RV Feeds Off Of Your Losses I'll Be Takin The "W'"z So That "I" Can See This "N"igga Was Costless ^^^no Oops I Just Made His Mouth Drop Like When I Pulled out My Dick They Say Im The "Magacian" The Way I Just "Call Out These Tricks" ^^^Ight.... Wow Dude Where's Your Life Your 20 Yrs Old and Your On RV? Damn I Always Knew That This "Ava" Character Couldnt Be "Archy" ^^^okay Stay "Focus" Mayne Or Else You Might Be Lookin "Ford" To Defeat You Trying To "Buy Some Pussy" When You Cant "Afford The Feet" ^^^Played closer Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules ^^^Lmao...good opener I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin That I use AIM all the time... ... when I want an easy win ^^^Uhhh...ight So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you ^^^Nice Ya writing is garbage n' quoted wordplay is madness But I see your the topical leader... ... when it comes to wackness ^^^Nice...i like this Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches I filled a verse with personals... ... like what ya need to find ANY bitches ^^^Good closer V./Datrushurtz.....this was an ight battle...aimez came played ...ur punchs were weak no hate but u didnt come strong...datrus u had a good solid verse wit good personals an good punchs that werent played it was consistent....good battle
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12-23-05, 05:31 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: B6F3 F93A
Trus-
Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches I filled a verse with personals... ... like what ya need to find ANY bitches vs. uh.....nothing v/trus bye a log shot.
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12-23-05, 06:32 PM | #9 | |||||||
Banned
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IP: F7E3 42B8
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That'll do. This killed & I mean KTFO out of Aimez when Truth didn't even seem he gave much effort. Seriously Aimez.. you used so much old shit it depressed me reading your stuff. People know I hate quotations, well quote what the hell you like, but this stuff . . Quote:
. . isn't good. V/DaTruth |
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12-24-05, 11:13 AM | #10 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: D6DE 8AA8
nice feedin there datrus......
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12-24-05, 11:22 AM | #11 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: D73A CB8F
I didn't feed man...
Feeding is when you make a specific reference to something in someone's verse and reply to it, ie, if you were to say i'm gay then I make a thing to prove I'm not gay. That apostrophe line was referring to just something in the thread, that's allowed and the opener was close to feeding, but it wasn't specific to anything in the verse so it's not. I mean, even if I did feed, look at the trash that kid dropped about me catching a bone so who cares lol |
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12-24-05, 11:24 AM | #12 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: D6DE 8AA8
yea, i was referring to the opener and that "quoted wordplay" part......... but its prolly not DQ-able anyways
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12-24-05, 12:31 PM | #13 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: D73A CB8F
Nope, sorry, I'm still here to win the tourney haha
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12-24-05, 12:32 PM | #14 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: E298 A863
Nah its not feeding.
anyway: Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin That I use AIM all the time... ... when I want an easy win Vs a 1980`s style structured verse. V/Datrushurtz, quite easily |
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12-24-05, 12:57 PM | #15 | |||
RobKilla
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IP: E071 B332
V/ Datrus... this was kinda eazzzy.... none of aim's punches connected to me.... and
So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you ^^ this was HILARIOUS!!!!! omg!!! that DEFINATELY won the battle for em... *fux, i dont think that was feeding, bc he'd have to say somethin about the actual stuff in his verse. just talkin about the structure.... well, actually, i think it could go either way, but i mean, lets be serious here, without that line, DTH would have still won and on top of that, the tourney would get kinda boring if we DQ'ed DTH and let the other dude go on... |
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