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Old 01-16-06, 07:23 PM   #1
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33. Haiku Sylabis vs. 34. NeFisTo

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Old 01-16-06, 09:59 PM   #2
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Old 01-18-06, 01:42 PM   #3
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Old 01-19-06, 07:56 PM   #4
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Five Seven Five Syllubis is Sticken to that Seventeen..
With Anerexic Punches..
Hes Like Mary Kate How he comes Light+cant Compare-To-Me..
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Old 01-19-06, 07:56 PM   #5
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Haiku=a poem of 17 syllables,first line being 5 second 7 then 5 so yeah =x
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Old 01-20-06, 12:15 PM   #6
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Old 01-20-06, 12:16 PM   #7
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Kids a fake rip off of nebisco cookies.... ya see...
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Death by me is the only way you could die-nasty

meh lame but vote up anyways folks
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Old 01-20-06, 12:24 PM   #8
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weak battle....
v/nefisto cuz die-nasty is played like fuck
shoulda followed up on the nebisco setup....
 
Old 01-20-06, 06:25 PM   #9
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Old 01-20-06, 07:24 PM   #10
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Five Seven Five Syllubis is Sticken to that Seventeen..
With Anerexic Punches..
Hes Like Mary Kate How he comes Light+cant Compare-To-Me..

^^-1st line didn't work,a failed attempt at a nameplay there.
And the 2nd line was stretched out.
Punch could have been really dope...if worded better and more direct.
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Kids a fake rip off of nebisco cookies.... ya see...
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Death by me is the only way you could die-nasty

^^-Die-nasty?..That wordplay is played.I used it last year in the summer.And even then,dudes told me it was played.Sorry.
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die-nasty iz played az fuck, n i usually dont mind shit if its played, but dayum that shit iz played, lol, werd
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Old 01-21-06, 05:43 PM   #15
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NeFisTo had a much better original punch...as mentioned, Haiku yours is played....

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