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10-24-06, 01:00 AM | #1 |
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Group D: Te Ora vs. Lord of Pens
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This is it fellas! This is the first week of Season 2! There's a $50 cash prize coming up this season. Start off the season with a win or risk falling into a hole that you can't get out of. Sorry about getting these matches up late, a lot of work came up. It shouldn't happen again. I'm keeping the same due dates. You guys should still have plenty of time to drop. Just remember to vote. I'd hate to have to DQ people because they didn't vote.
Battler #1: Te Ora Battler #2: Lord of Pens Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET) 4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET) Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do: - Feeding is allowed AND encouraged! - If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances. - Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar. - If you havent read the rules yet, do it now. Good Luck. Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 10-24-06 at 12:16 PM. |
10-25-06, 04:17 AM | #2 |
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IP: 5163 CDCF
check..
it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. |
10-26-06, 04:50 PM | #3 |
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^WOW
Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, |
10-27-06, 12:44 AM | #4 | ||
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IP: 5163 CDCF
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damz son that's original.. Quote:
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face |
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10-27-06, 06:02 AM | #5 |
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IP: 9F65 B308
lord of pens
Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? ^^aight cool concept even if it has been done...it kinda stretched tho..like the idea It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, ^^aight decent...i just dont like the set up...cuz i was expecting a name play but ok punch te ora it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. ^^ this was nice ...felt the set up lead into the punch..smooth flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face ^ aight both ways. cuz if your saying 'wit knee to the face' seems kinda forced but its aight...but if your not lol..its still an ok line...both ways its decent ..dont u wish her name was whitneys lol i liked te ora had one really nice line...and one decent line compared to lord's 2 decent lines vote-te ora
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10-27-06, 06:28 AM | #6 |
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it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. --this was ok but it was more of an angry statement flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face --lol, i liked this one. vs Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? --ehh, didnt really like this one, wording was bad plus it wasnt hard hitting It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, --ehh....should have been better vote/teora vote on mine fuckers |
10-27-06, 04:25 PM | #7 |
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Te Ora
it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood Not too bad.. flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face Best punch of the battle.. Lord of Pens Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? Nah.. It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, Seen similar shit to this before many times..[b] Vote: [b]Te Ora, took it in my eyes. |
10-27-06, 04:43 PM | #8 |
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IP: E090 9D02
Te: first punch was pretty shitty nameplay
second was good... but needed rewording Pens: first punch has been used second was worded fucking horribly v/ Te |
10-27-06, 04:58 PM | #9 |
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IP: B4E7 CC5D
Rofl.
t's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. alright nameplay, pretty good diss here. flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face lol cool wordplay and nice flip on what he done already. vs. Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? Too obvious and not to mention it was done, pretty much the same way before It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, Meh, there is too many punches like this for this to be considered originial or witty. Im gonna go with Te, for coming a lil harder with the lines and nameplays. Also the second lines were good for a feeding diss and explaining how its been used. V. Te Ora
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10-27-06, 05:09 PM | #10 |
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IP: B4E7 CC5D
Edit these in plz.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236319 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236317 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236315 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236314
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10-27-06, 05:10 PM | #11 |
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Rofl sorry man wrong thread.
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10-27-06, 06:56 PM | #12 |
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IP: 5163 CDCF
^ lmao..
here's mine thus far: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236318 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236314 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236319 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236329 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236324 |
10-27-06, 07:04 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 0992 DDA2
it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. --this was ok but it was more of an angry statement flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face --lol, i liked this one. vs Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? --ehh, didnt really like this one, wording was bad plus it wasnt hard hitting It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, --ehh....should have been better ye Te got his v/Te Ora
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10-28-06, 02:32 AM | #14 |
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v/te
t's 1st punch was bad, 2nd iight needed better wording lop 1st punch was bad n' so was the 2nd |
10-28-06, 12:40 PM | #15 | |
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it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain.. when i leave Pens covered in blood. This was decent flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face Lol nice' vs Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip, Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch? ^lol cool It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is, Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses, Could have been better Vote - Te |
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