aightt....whats up with 4 barrs mayne?

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da rematch......

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easy..keystyle

i'll Uppercut this fag, until he's levitating
Hit you so hard in your temple,
......it'll disturb monks meditating
I roll with myself which is certainly the dopest
While your crews made up rejects, vermin, & rodents
ya'll make threads about taking over..an get no reply
Just some fool saying your mom should of just let you die
As for ya girl, she's had an active year
The bitch get's tagged cheaper than TJ Maxx gear
style,structure an punchs are wack..he's the beholder
so how's m&m gonna make a return when he's only getting older
cut down ya fucking lines...thats just a tip maker
it's so stretched we could use'em as rubberbands to file paper's
your wack...infact ur vocal cord's should go numb
so if silence is golden....moneymaker will be double platnium

match me bitch

Don’t stepp up to me homeboy….you kinda like a Danish 100% Fruit Filling,
Phil don’t stand a chance because I add Etherr to my rhymes….ill call this Mercy Killing.
Nigga spits all lies so now its time to realize ya whack its a fact im wayin on ya headd like overdue bills,
Money going to stopp this nigga shine…Nigga will need help swallowing all this like Medical Pills.
Yo rhymes Part Whack and Part Boringg….sounds like a Begginnerr’s Blend,
Because any Money you was getting was ended by its Makerr so ya never Phil/Fill up on Benjamins.
My Capps will push ya mouth into another language…sound like ya Speakin Pharrsee,
Not very Well Known forr fire lines… and the clown of RV,
Because it aint safe to ride with you so this kidd gets on the site with a Carr Seat.
Tryna copy the Kingg…ill leave ya rockin like a Vibrate,
MM is a real Beast with these lyrics..you will have ya Top ate/8 like MySpace.
Strapp up forr War homie and get ya ass to the Frontline…..I know you fold up in CrunchTime,
I file Starvin Rapperrs like like LunchLines….so in other words yourr Six Wasted Punchlines.

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i'll Uppercut this fag, until he's levitating
Hit you so hard in your temple,
......it'll disturb monks meditating
As for ya girl, she's had an active year
The bitch get's tagged cheaper than TJ Maxx gear
your wack...infact ur vocal cord's should go numb
so if silence is golden....moneymaker will be double platnium

VS.

Yo rhymes Part Whack and Part Boringg….sounds like a Begginnerr’s Blend,
Because any Money you was getting was ended by its Makerr so ya never Phil/Fill up on Benjamins.


So basically, I thought this battle was one-sided. I only thought that one bar from Money was ok, it was still too stretched so the flow was off but the concept was ok. The wording could've also been better. Phil killed this with a quick keystyle with a consistent verse. He had some nice punches and those I quoted were raw, my favourite was the monk/temple line.

V/ - Phil Benjamin

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i'll Uppercut this fag, until he's levitating
Hit you so hard in your temple,
......it'll disturb monks meditating

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nada.

liked Phils consistancy. tha first line was enough to take it really. seems like mm is workin on his structure but still has a ways to go. not tryna be harsh, thas jus tha way I saw it.

Vote- Phil

Up over no-shows.

i'll Uppercut this fag, until he's levitating
Hit you so hard in your temple,
......it'll disturb monks meditating

vs.

nothing


i was close to quoting phil's closer, but saying he's silent enough to double platinum isn't really much of a diss. apart from that i felt the m&m punch in your verse had potential, just wasn't worked in the right way. i wasn't feeling anything from money, he needs to go read older battles & elevate.


v/ Phil Benjamin.

v: uncle phil

money ur style is as ugly as serge. not to meention ur punches lack. phil won with a better verse, better punches.

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As for ya girl, she's had an active year
The bitch get's tagged cheaper than TJ Maxx gear
cut down ya fucking lines...thats just a tip maker
it's so stretched we could use'em as rubberbands to file paper's

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Nothing

Phil, u came nicer last week against me, but still some okay lines in here. 2 lines I quoted were decent, but ya also had some played stuff like that opener that everyone seems to be quoting? Stretched line hit nicely cuz its true. MoneyMaker, u just came real played n' weak to me. Ur style needs a change dawg. Read up on how some of the better heads write to get a better idea.

Vote - Phil Benjamin

I'm not quoting anything from either one because both were shitty in my opinion, I have a feeling Phil Benjamin knows how to construct a verse and took it easy on moneymaker cause he knew he could edge it out. Moneymaker, your lines are horribly constructed, maybe if you took longer time to reword some shit to make it flow better and think up some fresher concepts you'd be aight.
I got phil winning this one tho with more consistency on mediocre punches

vote/phil

I didn't really see anything stand out from ya'll Phil the temple/monk line was alright... as was the Tagged/TJ Max... but other than that it was just like 'ok yea?'

and money maker... lol i just don't know about you homie...

Vote - Phil

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