check............16?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237641
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237644
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237639
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237721

word, 16 is cool..


g'l


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237639
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237641
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237645
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237648
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237723

Ora gel is for toothaches, numb that shit when it hurts
you should numb your hands...................
To prevent yourself from posting a shitty verse



I'm not sure whats worse, really not too much to say
cept' that your a subpar dude that gets hyped up by MRK
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
So step the fuck back and use a played drug line, G...
dude tried to steal my keyboard so he could type like me
I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock
Te's family would've been thankful...................
until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it
If I ever seen you in a bar, I'd throw a bottle and start a fight
I go barhoppin' on Wednesdays....................................
So I'll drop now so you won't have to sweat it till' Thursday night

i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS
kempo must have a sense of humour as his jokes are considerable
he squared me off against a square.. & i laughed 'cause it's so literal



that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things
'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !?
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes
the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock
Te's family would've been thankful...................
until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

VS.

i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS
that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes
the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar


Aight, this was a cool battle. Both dropped pretty raw with consistent verses. All of the punches were decent in their own right, but not all were worth quoting. I have Te taking this battle because he had just one more bar that was quotable. That grammar line also was fucking raw, and the fruit of your labour line was nice. Grams had the thanksgiving line which was funny, the only problem with his verse was he used a bit too much gay lines, although they were funny.

V/ - Te Ora

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You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

vs

that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things
'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !?
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

V/te ora....this was a good one...close battle...grams those lines where pretty good.. i felt them..but you did fell off in some areas also some played lines you had...te those lines i quoted where dope...you verse was all around more consistent with less played lines you get my vote.

Ora gel is for toothaches, numb that shit when it hurts
you should numb your hands...................
To prevent yourself from posting a shitty verse
^GOOD SHOT, I HAVEN'TBEEN HERE LONG E-NUFFF TO KNOW IF THIS NAMEPLAY IS PLAYED ONHIM OR NOT SO I'MAGO HEAD AND QUOTE IT
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
LMAO
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
^LOL



vs



that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
^ FUNNY STUFF
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
^NICE
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar
^ GOOD SHOT AT HIS NAME ALSO


I have it tied in quotes so I'm gonna but those against each other to see who got the better shit. I like the "Excluded Punchline" Quote but the fact that Gram actually did spit some kinda negated thatand I liked that "Orajel" thing so ADVANTAGE GRAM. The "Subway line was funny but the TE line about the "Rank" came off alil more harsher since it was a good personal flipped into an insult. ADVANTAGE TE ORA
The "gilrly Men" line was also funny but It coulda got used on N.e body where as the Wordplay on Te's "Grammer"line hit harder cause it was actually about the other guy kinda similar to the last comparison so ADVANTAGE TE ORA


v/ Te Ora

One more quote from either coulda swung it in your favor without question but since quotes were tied I had to judge it that way. Te Ora just had the more direct hits.

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You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

vs

that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things
'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !?
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

te got this 1 easy he had more quotes n' everything the other guy had some iight lines but te got this 1, nothing more to say

v/ te

grams

You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat

So step the fuck back and use a played drug line, G...
dude tried to steal my keyboard so he could type like me

vs

te ora

i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS

did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things
'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !?

.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

i felt this battle...grams started out good but kinda feel off ...i thought he was gonna take this..te ora had to many hott lines i felt the lbs and dimebags line

vote-Te ora

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3WST.

good looks people....nice drop te.

yea, props on the battle dude. i'll get to voting a lil later.

Overall I feel that Te Ora Took this battle basically bcuz of his consistency of punchez not jus how hard they hit but how manu he threw and he actually kept it a little more personal then Grams did if you ask me so my vote goes to

te ora

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock
Te's family would've been thankful...................
until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

vs.

i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes
the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

that thanksgivin line by grams was prolly tha funniest thing that I've read in awhile. tha ora line was cool too. But overall didn't come close to Te's verse. Openin was killer. Closer was ill. eurything in tha middle hit nicely. not much to say.

Vote-Te Ora