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01-05-07, 09:37 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Flame Throwing pt1
IP: 48A3 374B
Just a lil something , tell me what u think
I got pain in my soul, Momma’s praying on the low/ My homies backstabbed me for the fame and the dough/ When I commence the system you see flames on the door/ I’m driving the fast lane with rain on the road/ I do big movements similar to Sasquatch/ Give me a chance to grab the mic spit like a mouth wash / I’m notorious, glorious meritorious you inglorious Bet your existence mayne, I’ll result victorious/ I got blaze in my essence, gaze at my presence/ My phrases amazes and braces adolescents/ Hip-hop is dead with this download, trying to burn cable/ The only 45 you’ve seen was playing on a turntable/ I’m able, to spray any way slay the prey/ I’m a king you the spades, in the states Dee gon flay/ Is only two cases, me and this danger/ I pack in the coffins, lost the key to the chamber/ I shoot PIG’s, feed of the crime/ I fuck with P08’s and P99’s/ I waste replicas, don’t like all this phony weak thugs/ Dee got more bars and shots than lonely street clubs/ P.M. me two links and I will reopen your thread. Links cannot be over 10 days old.
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Last edited by Willa : 01-17-07 at 06:03 AM. |
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01-05-07, 10:19 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 48A3 374B
uppin fo feed shit
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01-05-07, 11:23 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: B66A 4983
your opener was good though i thought you shoud have stayed
on that path, cos for me it just started to get a little to random through out the verse, and the sasquatch thing, i really was not feelin that, other than that ya flow and such was pretty descent, while i dont feel like there was an obvious message behind this as i thought the ending was to sharp, and just didnt give a satisfying finisher, overall i think it sill needs a lil more work , no hate... be easy...peace |
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01-06-07, 01:27 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 48A3 374B
word, thanx uppin this ish
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01-09-07, 11:16 AM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 33E3 44D7
Tha opener was good...... but ya flow kinda fell off to me... kinda choppy in places but still nice over all
7/10
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