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03-16-07, 02:06 PM | #1 | |||
I Hurt.
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7. Popcorn (1-0) vs. 8. Alphabetized (1-0)
IP: 6C02 AD00
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03-18-07, 09:07 PM | #2 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 56AC 4C9B
...what in the hell? lmao @ this battle.
check chek. g/l |
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03-19-07, 07:57 PM | #3 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 56AC 4C9B
Headed to jail, but this isn't the longest yard.
I see you with your head down...but prayin' wont save you from my bars. My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined. You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion. Dog, don't you see our weapons...we're meant to hurt guys. We've been raised in prisons...dog its looks like its your f*ckin' first time! Scared to look...got your eyes closed, mouth shut. We're here for life...you an overnighter with ya' butt-buddies waiting out front. These tools ain't for diggin'...they're to pound chumps. I see you surrounded by police...but they too scared to come 'round us!! Yeah it's an old pic...might be thinkin' that these kids need clothes. But just look...you got caught on survailance while we got our VICTORY POSE!!! ...shit idk...thats all i could up with lmao!! |
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03-19-07, 09:09 PM | #4 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: A1E4 9BCF
I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help
Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself! i've been recently released... due to some hostile behavior But after I murder you, i wont do 20-life.. just the world a favor I don't care about you, and it's obvious your not on top cuz im only giving you the boot.. before yours rot the fuck off Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them It seems like you been slacking... s'why imma leave you really hurt I'd give u a hand with your diggen.. so the kid on the right could do his work You been to prison, and mad fucking bitchy.. like its a fucking shock? I'm just guessing you woke up on the wrong side of Tyrone's cock Keyed. |
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03-19-07, 09:44 PM | #5 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: A1E4 9BCF
Uppin just cuz people usually only vote when they see 4 posts in a thread.
This is my check. Lol. |
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03-20-07, 04:43 PM | #6 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 82DE 174C
pop-nice verse, pretty solid...kinda played, but good opener ne way...gerat closer, shyt was nice...flow was prolly the only thing that needed some work...good punches and werdplay
alpha-decent opener...didnt like the closer tho bro..the line about his boots fallin off coulda been real ill if you would rhymed it better or chose some diffreerent words... good battle v/popcorn |
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03-20-07, 08:47 PM | #7 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: F2F3 4198
Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men
S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them vs. i didnt really see anything creative pop? wtf? ehhh. v/alpha
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03-21-07, 10:21 PM | #8 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3519 4895
OMG. No contest, Alpha gets my vote with eaaaaase. He just made reading all those other sub-par verses worth it. Other than a couple of punches, his whole verse was fire. Keep at it duke, you already look like a threat. Pop, usually you come better, but what you had this time was uncreative and pretty badly worded. That's why Alpha gets my vote.
V/ Alphabetized |
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03-22-07, 01:50 PM | #9 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 72EA 7D38
Headed to jail, but this isn't the longest yard.
I see you with your head down...but prayin' wont save you from my bars. ^^meh My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined. You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion. ^^coo Dog, don't you see our weapons...we're meant to hurt guys. We've been raised in prisons...dog its looks like its your f*ckin' first time! ^^nah Scared to look...got your eyes closed, mouth shut. We're here for life...you an overnighter with ya' butt-buddies waiting out front. ^^ehh, iight These tools ain't for diggin'...they're to pound chumps. I see you surrounded by police...but they too scared to come 'round us!! ^^iight Yeah it's an old pic...might be thinkin' that these kids need clothes. But just look...you got caught on survailance while we got our VICTORY POSE!!! ^^lol... wat a racist ass pic decent verse, some punches hit, some didnt.. but you held an overall cool consistency.. i think you could have done more with the use of the pic vs I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself! ^^its over i've been recently released... due to some hostile behavior But after I murder you, i wont do 20-life.. just the world a favor ^^lmao I don't care about you, and it's obvious your not on top cuz im only giving you the boot.. before yours rot the fuck off ^^meh Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them ^^lol... nice It seems like you been slacking... s'why imma leave you really hurt I'd give u a hand with your diggen.. so the kid on the right could do his work ^^ok You been to prison, and mad fucking bitchy.. like its a fucking shock? I'm just guessing you woke up on the wrong side of Tyrone's cock ^^lol, you grimey ass nigga nice verse here alpha, i was feelin the creativity you put into some of the punches. i liked the opener and shabby bars line.. keep this up alphie v/Alphabetized |
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03-23-07, 11:14 AM | #10 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined.
You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion. vs. I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself! Pretty close battle here. Both verses lacked a bit in creativity, but weren't too bad. Popcorn only thing i didn't like in ur verse was u kinda dissed ur boys a lot. U put a good spin on things like on how much of a hardass u guys are, but really i think it hurt ya. Alpha was more consistent, I got him here. Vote - Alpha |
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03-23-07, 11:14 AM | #11 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
Alpha wins 4-1
Alphabetized WINS 2-0 Popcorn LOSES 1-1 |
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