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08-03-08, 10:32 PM | #1 | |||||
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Flight (8) vs Lil Wayne (3)
IP: 534F DFE5
Flight vs Lil Wayne
Due times: Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST. - if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes. Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific. Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late. Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent. Line limits: 10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts. Voting: Must post THREE links of you voting into your check in, or its minus ONE vote for each missing link. If you want to win, then vote or you will most likely lose. Goodluck.
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08-03-08, 10:38 PM | #2 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 6A27 1462
squadalaaa
brapp brapp im goin 12
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08-04-08, 08:37 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
sure.
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08-08-08, 05:32 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay peace.
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08-08-08, 10:59 PM | #5 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
mister taco.
see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight |
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08-08-08, 11:02 PM | #6 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
yo im not wayne, he had me post for him cause he's outta town. check the IPs i guess
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08-09-08, 01:20 AM | #7 | |||||
aka'd
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IP: 9E12 3286
they don't match, lol, but whatever... as long as fux takes a pound of whiskey.
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08-09-08, 03:27 AM | #8 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: C5F9 BA42
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body nice opener this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI barely descent cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne descent wordplay enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped nice Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him Creative / Clever wordplay here its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay barely descent verses see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes nice opener so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up nice I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name Descent Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun Barely descent he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type good you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight barely descent ------------------------------------ this was an evenly matched battle. The intensity of the disses were just about matched. The creativity in the wordplay that created the impact of the diss was key in this battle. I believe that El Taco won this battle based on this category. Vote - El Taco, slightly better disses
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08-09-08, 01:38 PM | #9 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes ^I used an ET punch like 2 weeks ago. This wasn't funny at all or even really even dissing Kesse, to be honest. so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up ^No. Hated it. I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name ^No. Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun ^No. he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type ^Nah, man. you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight ^This was your best line. the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body ^Alright. this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI ^Naaah. cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne ^Hahaha. enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped ^Nah. Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him ^Liked it. its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay ^Eh. Flight took this really easily. About one of his decent lines would have taken this battle for him. Wayne, you didn't have anything I really liked except your last bar and that was only alright. Should try working on wordplay. Kesse's verse had humor which appeals to me and a very decent punches which easily brought him the win. V/Kesse |
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08-09-08, 11:36 PM | #10 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 2BA6 1F0F
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body The wording on this punch was shockingly gay. this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI Ok, regardless of the fact that I don't know CALI, this punch read as a statement and it was really basic. cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne WOW, can you say played. enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped Again, this is more of a statement. Weak bro. Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him I get the concept, that was cool. The execution was weak. its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay Yeah, no comment. VS. see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes Lol, the wordplay in this was cool bro. so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up No, this was utter garbage. I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name Concept was nice, execution was poor. Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun This was weak bro. he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type OH HELL NO! Get the fuck outta here with the MJ lines. you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight Ok concept, weak execution again. What the fuck is up this week? I've seen two decent verses and both were in my battle. Seriously, y'all need to step it up. I am actually finding some of these votes amusing because most of you are giving props to lines that were being dropped back in 2002. This battle was weak, I found that both battlers had at least one or two concepts that could've been executed nice. They failed though with poor wording. Lil Wayne, or the dude who posted up the verse, whatever, he had the only punch in this entire battle worth mentioning and that was his opener. It wasn't great, but the wordplay was cool and it made me giggle. v/ - Lil Wayne, bring more consistency next time. |
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08-10-08, 04:26 PM | #11 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: 3854 963A
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body nah didnt like this wordplay this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI nah dawg too simple cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne lol the john part is played but you flipped it with the nameplay enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped lmao nah way too simple Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him this was cool its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay wasnt feeling this vs. see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes fucking wack, played, and aint even rhyme at all so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up nah man wasnt good lol I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name you coulda flipped this wordplay so much better homie Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun tacos dont have buns lmao... he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type lol ok but still not good you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight this was already used homie, played ok ima have to vote for flight cuz lil wayne you didnt rhyme at good man, and ur wording was bad some concepts were ok but u needa work on them, word them better dawg v/ Flight |
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08-10-08, 04:58 PM | #12 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: EBB4 6039
see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes vs Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him ause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne This was actually pretty close, but I think flight edged it out with more consistancy..an he was a bit more creative.
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08-10-08, 06:19 PM | #13 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: EBB4 6039
Flight wins 4 - 1
Flight (11) and Wayne (2)
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