iigh..

10 linez max (quik battle)
no crew, hate or d/r votes
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Check in Good luck, hey if i say ne thing bad u noe it cuz the rap game dont mean ne of it. Aight lets go................................................ ...................

Street Legend? You an Amateur in this game.
You rap "fly" wit "die" you think thats goin earn you buckets of fame?
The only bucket you got was a bucket of KFC wings
You clueless about bein defensive just like Yao Ming
You stutter, shake, almost lose your grip
My rhymes got a firm hold, yours about to slip
10 lines? I know why you dont wanna it long
That gives you a moment, to sneak away to your bong
You must be laces cuz you just got tied in a knot
3-0 (Winning streak) you cant beat me my ass is hot

Just kiddin wit you , spit it

Your some boot-legged white chocolate that poses as milk chocolate//
This kat's got tha whole site 'cravin' fo him but still in votes, he's not 'toppin it'//
White's name could be Aaliyah nd he still wudn't be 'rockin-it'// (Rock The Boat)
Tonite this whack emcee gets served fresh; there's no time fo him ta crop-his-shit//

This joka is hard on tha outside nd soft on tha inside sorta like an apple pit//
Juss like he's bout ta 'fall in one', dug deep; it'll leave you wit a 'lyrical zit'//
Imma bout ta wreck that winnin streak of urs, leavin you crushed nd inna fit//

iigh...my verse...kinda whack..force this but oh well..lets get some votes..

yea street legend killed him, white's verse was pretty generic as always but i can see improvement in his verses, but street took dis shit no doubt, but white should keep workin on his shit and make an improvement

streetlegend took it

it looked to me like both your verses took little to no time to think up

both very elementary and no real punch lines

white yours was mainly a bunch of filler lines compiled to make a verse

streetlegend at least you have some punches, alltough soft they were


vote=streetlegend

iigh..
1-0 me
keep em commin
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Aight thx ne ways... lol i made it in 2 minutes ppl w/e keep them comin............................................. ..............................................

yo mah vote goes to white i liked his spit it was tight nice punches

vote = whitechocolate^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

iigh, 2-1...
uppin fa more votes.
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i think whitechocalte had funnyier metaphors and better punches in his versealothough legand was very creative im votin for whitey cuz he came harder, if legend wouldve tryed harder he wouldve killed

Thx trix aight 2-3 uppin for votes............................................. .........................................

aite as i said before i like comedy so whitechocolate won this, streets verse was hot too but whites punches came a lil harder

VOTE=WhiteChocolate

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