10-20 Lines
No crew votes
No dickriding
No hate votes
All votes must be explained
You spit first
Due: Whenever you want it too be due

yo bash ........feeble dont come on till late n he might not see this so i think its a lil fuckin harsh the due dates tomorow ...............so wait till he checks in to start a due date aight

yo...

I SPIT FIRST LAST TIME...
U FIRST THIS TIME!!!!!!!!

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and ill spit the night that u spit......>>>>
u will see my spit the next day no matter what...
just spit whenever u want...
and its a good thing i felt like readin good battles cuz usually i dont come in here cuz no one votes.....


GO!

...peace....

Check this out feeble...............................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=66988

yo feeble this is a crew battle so take this kidd down, ya lost in the frontlines but ya did go first last time so the outcome might be different, take him down i kno ya can cuz u got some skillz wit ya, holla, and good luck

I can “Decipher” your “Lines” like I play “Scrabble” and “Text-Twist"/
get your “Chest-Hit” when I “Twist my Text” into “Clips” then “Shoot” out my “Tech”/
Knockout Blows Sprayed , While Feeble is 'Packin Very Little Punches', Like 'Midgets Employed By Kool-Aid'/ (Get it)
Make Feeble Ice An 'Rep A Set' , Ya Life is The 'Opposite of Shaq At Freethrow lines', 'Nothin-But-Net'/
U a Trainee Not A Soldier but U Can Still Get Ur Head Cracked,
So Step Back Cause My Bullets Like Little Meteors because They Cause MASS Destruction Wit' "A Smidge Of Impact",
I'll Send-u-Losses, Leave Ur Team Wit "Heavy Blood Lost" N Put Ur Men-On-Pauses(menopause)
I'll Leave This "Bitch-In-Tha-Dark" When I "Click-And-Spark", I Might "Split-Ya-Heart"/
He still wouldnt be able too hit me even if he "Swing-Both-Ways" Like "Kids-In-Tha-Park"/
"Rip-Him-Apart", Let Tha Bullet "Poke-Thru-Ya-Dome"/
You "Out-Of-my-Range" Like "Long-Distance" On "Nokia Phones"/
I've Learned That I'm "Scarin-Him" He Knows He "Wants-No-Beef" Like "Conservative-Vegetarian"(conservative=refuse to change)-
He's A Humiliation Tha "Skeleton-Wearin-His-Skin", To Say "Nice-Try" After This Wouldn't Be "Fair-To-Him/
My Punches "Land-directly-in-His-Mouth", This Nigga Need "Doctor's-Help" To Establish Himself As The "Man-Of-The-House"/
He Can't Get Tha "Upper-Hand-In-This-Bout"/
You "Play-Me-Close", I'll Invite "Tiger-Woods" To Yo "Gravesite", Just too Have Him Play Your Eighteen-Holes"/ (Sick line right here , think about it)
Stop "Pinin'" Because You "Behind-Me", Bakin Ya "Yeast" Infection The Only Way You "Makin-Dough"/

I'm out..Spit ur shit

If u think it's too long , juss inform me , and I will remove some lines...
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yo..listen up ...please read the whole thing! some parts may be iller than others (all is ill tho lol)...thanks.

yo...

we all know this guys gay..cuz he gives heterosexuals glaring-hates..this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits!// (bearing straights) lol! explanation...the bering strait is a waterway near alaska, and gay people have to bear straights...2

slash-his-hopes and throw out words-of-wrath..cuz like injured felines im gonna hurt-this-cat//
his words is like garbage trucks they carry dirty-trash..his opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash// 5

i'll admit he's beat a rapper..he was proud to say he did-the-crime..until the press released that the kid-was-nine!// lol
he was proud of his punch..except that it was-mine! cuz like auctioned-watches all he does is bid-for-time!// 8

its like crashing-parties..cuz im serving bash-merkings..he took all day to write that shit..although i tried to stop his ass-working!// (a bash is a party) 10

if this was a topical about life, we'd see bash-gone..cuz last time i checked its easy enough to say he has-none!//
im electin bash as nun!..cuz it'd make ya seem even holier with a gash-son!!// (nun is holy, gash is a hole) 12

i hold his mind captive..like storing-his-brain-in-a-box..even though his game-is-on-lock..i dont give herbs second chances so i spray-him-with-glocks// 14

its like a prisoner bit his brain cuz i captive-ate his mind!..he cant see me winning so i laugh and say he's blind// 16

SERVED..
i dont even need this part..cuz i already won-this-battle...but
i wished they banned for sucking..i know someone to tattle!// (tattle on)


FINISHED..
didn't they teach you in school? its not smart to face kings...
now you'll know for the future..feeble minds do great things!//

lmao! served....

vote...

vote like this:

personals- these are name disses....ex: opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash//

wordplay- using one word to sound like another....my first bar had one...this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits (bearing straights)

punches- (duh) who had the best peeps.

metties: comparin one thing to another...

multis-rhymin more than one word in a sentence...like this: i captivate his hate he aint straight...(a bad example but u get it)

oops...this is elite i prolly just wasted my time but fuck it.....

uppin vote pansies........................................... .................................................. .....................................

oh and why did you edit?
vote anyway peeps....i still won i think i dont care if he edited....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

personals- FEEBLE, I ONLY SEEN 1 SO I'LL TAKE THE 'S' OFF PERSONALS LOL NAH JUST PLAYIN..YA HAD 2 SO YEA FEEBLE

wordplay- BOTH, I THINK WORD PLAY WAS SORTA EVEN

punches- BOTH, SO MANY I FEEL LKE QUOTIN, BUT WON'T

metties: BOTH

multis- BOTH

OVERALL I GIVE MY VOTE TO FEEBLE, IT WAS SORT OF CLOSE BUT AS I ALWAYS SAY..PERSONALS ALWAYS MAKES A DIFFERENCE


HIT THIS UP WITH A FAIR VOTE, APPRECIATE IT: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68263

Because my verse was long as fuck , so i removed some lines , I dont care who wins , because It's just da net

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SHOULDA SAID U WERE TAKIN LINES OUT.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

GOOD BATTLE....1