Aight lets go

My Rules
You spit first
10-14 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes


Lets get this goin

ok man checkin in gl to both of us im spittin and going to sleep lol
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aight hurry up yo................................................ .............................
Oh yea i'm not gonna feed i forgot to put the no feeding rule in.
Good Luck Kid.....................

shit sorry my comp just fuckin crashed w/e i remember most of my verse

I'm 'kickin' vicious shit so speak and you'll be shittin Timbs for weeks//
Ya rhymes could use some definition so here's a list of synonyms for "weak"//
Timid, slim, and beat; pathetic, ass, scrawny, tired, and hopeless//
Ya mic's wires are frozen cuz ya lyrics is 'short on fire' like roaches//
Be careful cuz death approaches, ya left lying in a herse//
Leaving this earth 'toe-tagged' like playin hide n seek with a smurf//
Now tha beast has emerged, teachin this herb to plot tha blue print//
You must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent//
Here's my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with ur mind cluttered//
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure//
I leave spines ruptured, show you how i attack tracks and score fast//
Call me a weatherman when i put ur norm ass in four casts//
I spin tricks with scorn and anger, while Mortality leaves them suspense-less//
Mortality="I see whack people!!"i guess i got that sixth sense...//

peace

Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//
Late at night all you do is "Blare" People think you crazy but all they can do is "Look and Stare"//
I'm about to make you soar as a "Blister" See i done fucked ya mom now i'm at ya "Sister"//
Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//
Your punches are little mind as well call them "Humane" i have you in terror of death you runnin like "Saddam Husain"//
You wish you had skill you call yourself "Hypochondriac" you read my first 2 lines and you relize you wish you had a 2nd chance to "React"//
See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//
You on my computer is juss a fucked up "Megabyte" After ya done readin my verse you'll notice my shit is "Hella-tite"//
Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//

Done!

That's only 9 lines but oh well
it's good enough
lets get some votes.................................

yo maortalit go into our batle and drop ya verse........hurry................................ ......................

wow. mortality is really good. must not be a REAL newb. jus new to RB. lol... i liked these lines:


Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//

Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//

See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//

Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//


lol they made me laugh and overall i think u had the better verse.
ur really good. elevate an come try out for the Executives !

ok nice battle man
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lets get some votes

hmm,,,,,,on the real....rappad came nice......betta punches..he had creativity in his disses and wordplay....nice flow...

Mortality was iight but his punches did'nt hit that hard...he had some nice oneliners..disses were a lil mediocre did'nt land with no heat...creativity was'nt there.....I can see him progression as a top newbie but just not with this rhyme here....

vote rappad...................................return Fav!

my bad........tha poll vote is in!!!......................................holla.. .................................................. ...........

TRUE!`

uppin
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ya mortality had a crazy verse but rappad was a bit better with the punches...everythin else was tie.......only an honest vote....no beef......