here we go...

30 Lines Max
No Crew/dr/hatin
I Will Spit First

I Am In .... nI mA I
Good Luck ... kcuL dooG
You'll Need It...tI deeN ll'uoY

-Sureal ... laeruS-

Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know..
...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose..
This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations..
Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications..
Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines..
Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n..
He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness..
Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice..
Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson..
Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'..
And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch..
Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch..
Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness..
Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss..
Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch..
Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once..

16... Now Lets See Your 30 Line Book...

*I showed you this site..and look what you have done..but it's time to play dirty...Here is my book*

I am sick of all your meaningless shit
this is from the heart not prewrit
brace yourself for the personal effects
there'll be more punches than you had sex
guess I only need one
your the caucasian that's dried up and done
committ suicide here is the fuckin gun
do you even know what pussy is
you get off at the sight of your own giz
what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you
it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew?
every fuckin person who saw ya "together"
went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better
tellin us about how she was the one you were gunna hit
you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy!
all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed
ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small
always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all
look you got something in common!
less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack
it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity
it was just something made to be
Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin
you keep runnin ur cannon about Em
"If we had a text...I could beat em"
blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit
your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere

__________________

I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

Sureal took this easily. Lawyer line was nice, calculus was cool, closer was your best line. I liked it. I'll be back later to break this down. . it's 1:30 am and I'm too tired to really go line for line.

Sureal had this wrapped up like small condoms on 12" dicks right from the start. He had much better flow, more complexity, better punches and wordplay. in short better verse. White came really newbyish, he had simple punches and nothin that stood out at all.


Vote=Sureal

Sureal


Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know..
...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose..


^wack


This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations..
Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications..

^eh..that was ok



Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines..
Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n..


^filler.



He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness..
Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice..

^decent personal. had potential to be dope but you didnt follow all the way through. good nonetheless


Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson..
Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'..

^played


And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch..
Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch..

^lol...good.


Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness..
Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss..


^ set up was good but the 2nd line was blah.


Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch..
Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once..


^lol...dope closer.


whitelightning...hole shit you were all over the place here...


I am sick of all your meaningless shit
this is from the heart not prewrit
brace yourself for the personal effects
there'll be more punches than you had sex
guess I only need one
your the caucasian that's dried up and done
committ suicide here is the fuckin gun
do you even know what pussy is
you get off at the sight of your own giz


^this shit was all filler. qualitly or quantity my friend.


what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you
it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew?
every fuckin person who saw ya "together"
went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better


^eh...this hard he potential to be killer. you couldve won this battle right here...but you were way to inconsistant and didnt come close to pulling it off.


you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy!
all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed
ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small
always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all
look you got something in common!


^what....the...fuck?


less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack
it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity
it was just something made to be
Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin
you keep runnin ur cannon about Em
"If we had a text...I could beat em"
blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit
your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere

^again potential but you made it wack.


Lightning obviously couldve killed it here but his verse was to be honest....wack. your bars were all over the place and 1/4 of the time you didnt even rhyme.

Sureals verse wasnt that good either but he took this with his 2 good punces...



vote-Sureal

Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know..
...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose..


OK..seen better from u before..


This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations..
Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications..

^eh..that was ok



Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines..
Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n..


^filler.



He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness..
Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice..

^decent personal. had potential to be dope but you didnt follow all the way through. good nonetheless


Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson..
Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'..

^played


And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch..
Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch..

^lol...good.


Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness..
Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss..


^ set up was good but the 2nd line was blah.


Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch..
Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once..


^lol...dope closer.


whitelightning...hole shit you were all over the place here...


I am sick of all your meaningless shit
this is from the heart not prewrit
brace yourself for the personal effects
there'll be more punches than you had sex
guess I only need one
your the caucasian that's dried up and done
committ suicide here is the fuckin gun
do you even know what pussy is
you get off at the sight of your own giz


^this shit was all filler. qualitly or quantity my friend.


what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you
it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew?
every fuckin person who saw ya "together"
went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better


^eh...this hard he potential to be killer. you couldve won this battle right here...but you were way to inconsistant and didnt come close to pulling it off.


you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy!
all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed
ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small
always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all
look you got something in common!


^what....the...fuck?


less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack
it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity
it was just something made to be
Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin
you keep runnin ur cannon about Em
"If we had a text...I could beat em"
blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit
your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere

^again potential but you made it wack.


Lightning obviously couldve killed it here but his verse was to be honest....wack. your bars were all over the place and 1/4 of the time you didnt even rhyme.

Sureals verse wasnt that good either but he took this with his 2 good punces...

foreal Dezyir broke it down well......nice battle....wasnt feelin whites verse that much...

it doesnt let me poll da battle............................................ .................................................. .........................................

This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations..
Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications..
Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines..
Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n..
^^^^^
took it for sureal.....

THIS WAS OK BATTLE
SUREAL HAD WAY BETTER PUNCHES

SUREAL ISNT AS GOOD AS I THOUGHT he would be
but he roasted whitelightning here

The first 2 lines out of sureals shit was plain wack

VOTE SUREAL