14 lines,
i go first
no hate
no crew
no D/R
blah blah

I’m Erratic, You’re Static, When I’ve Started-You’ve-Had-It
Take The Holes In Your Rhyme And Like Austin-I’ll-Shag-It
I’m Drastic, Don’t Mask-it Yo Lines Are Like Elastic (stretched)
You Couldn’t ‘Cum’ Deep If You ‘Fucked’ In A Casket
Emphatically I Merk-You; Like A Tennis Ball I Serve-You
Your Curfew! You Better Run Home Before I Hurt-You
I’ll Burst-You-With-Pressure; You’re Cursed-To-Be-Lesser
So Confess That I’m Better Coz This Verse-Will-Suppress-Ya
I Suggest-That-You-Train, I’ll Maim With Zest-For-The-Game
You Need To Gain A Vest For Suggesting-I’m-Lame
You’re Repressed I Request You Throw-In-The-Towel
You See My Lines And Your Shit Can’t Hold-In-The-Bowel
I’m Old-In-The-Mouth And Long-In-The-Tooth
Your Remains Will Be Proof That I’ve ‘Bombed’-On-This-Youth

you've had nearly an hour dawg, c'mon you said it wouldn't take you long to write a rhyme....................... .............

WHAT A FUCKING BITCH ASS NO SHOW< IMMA MAKE INSANEWHITEBOYS LIFE ON HERE HELL IF HE DONT DROP.......... .............................................. .................................................. .........................

~you call me elastic but ur shyty like plastic i strecth cuz u niggas cant break me or shake me//
~ur lyrics dont hurt they is jus to weak to come take me//
~yall niggas is fake give me a break u wit talent ha//
~i good puff on a posionious inhalent nd still drop lines to tear up ur rhymes//
~im u 4 times ops times four my lyrics r so good that i dont even need 2 spit nemore//
~u whore i can take u to the floor after 1 line mobody will even remember u nemore//
~they call me insane cuz my rhymes burrow in ur membrain//
~my shit flows heavy like rain u cant even stain my style hide u in da bottom of the nile//
~u been devowered and over come with the power//

yo this was an average battle so let's break it down:

opener:com
finisher:com
wordplay:com
worth reading:com
punches:com

my vote goes to com good luck to both y'all cats though

Lemme Break It Down....

Punches-Com
Flow-Com
Wordplay-Com
Overall-Com

Merking....Enough Was Said

Ight breakdown:
Punches:COM
FLOW:COM
Wordplay:COM
MultisEFINETLY COM
OVERALL VERSE: WHO THE FUCK U THINK?

Vote: COM

insane don't feed off others verses and elevate learn bigger words n better wordplay

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

no now enough wuz said.........it wuznt even fair!!!!

vote=com

COM's Verse Flowed And Had Multies But His Punches Werent That Strong And His Wordplay Slacked A Bit.He Takes This One Tho.Insane Was Too Weak

Stop Battling Herbs COM.

Vote-COM

yo im givin it to com if i could vote i thought he came harder then insane w did his punchs hit he had wordplay multis complexity flow insane w ya had some good shit but not good enough for com aight props vote com and hit this battle up fo me niggas be sleepinon it aight niggas holla



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ight, this battle was iiiight


Com had the wordplays and multis, punches not so great

that other dude was just straight weak, sorry man, im not gon say it was an okay verse, it lacked in a lot of areas

Com had the better shit

Vote = Com

^^^thx for the props and thx to insanewhiteboy for droppin, i realing thought he was gonna pull a no-show, so sorry for trippin dawg, i hate no shows, .....uppin for votes