aiight 10 lines max you spit first

If you are offended by explanations – DON’T READ THEM!!!

CAPITALS mean there’s wordplay goin on

Oh yeh - I said in the battle call 14 so here they are:


I’ll flip ya lid and suck the blood out like ~DRACULA~
I got IDLE HANDS so you gon have to reattach it yourself – with a ~SPATULA~
You jus another CLONE fallin’ off the ship – rejected by ~ALIENS~
And yo rappin’ style and THEORIES so dumb they could be ~RAELLIAN~
You don’t like SMOKIN TREES ‘less they on a BONFIRE you prefer ~FLORIST’S-but-still-JUMP~
And you don’t like BUSH neither so Imma make you run through the ~FOREST-CHUMP~
Fuckin boastin sayin you SPLIT WIGS when you couldn’t ~CULL-A-CURL~
And don’t ever say you strong cuz with muscles you couldn’t ~PULL-A-GIRL~
You musta inherited the dumb gene from your mum - sayin you ~FLOSS-A-BRACE~
But you were only born cuz she fucked then turned the rubber inside out and used it again cuz she thought it ~WAS-SAFE~
You only UNKNOWN cuz you live a shady life like ~JEFFERY-DAHMER~
You don’t eat men – you eat em out like ~EVERY-STARTER~
It’d be a FEAT if you ever had SOUL like ~ARETHRA-FRANKLIN~
Cuz the closest to you getting laid will be ~URETHRA-SPANKIN~



<I>EXPLANATIONS</I>

Line 2 = There’s a film called Idle Hands – in that one of the livin dead reattaches his head usin a spatula.

Lines 3 & 4 = The Raellians are a religious cult who believe that aliens created the world and also say they’ve created the first human clone.

Line 6 = Forest Chump = Forrest Gump – In the film he was a real fast runner.

Line 7 = Split WIGS = Cull a CURL (cull means murder)

Line 8 = muscles – pull a girl along / pull a girlfriend.

Lines 11 & 12 = His name’s Unknwon – Jeffery Dahmer ate some men.

Line 13 = Feat = Feet / Soul = Sole (bottom of foot) Arethra Franklin = Soul Singer

Line 14 = Urethra = Tube in Dick so urethra spankin = masturbating.



Also - do I need to vote and post links here?



G/L - *TaH*

aiight check this out

ayo my defining of ill ness means you make me sick/
stop fucking wit the F.A.G.S and TAH go suck Ja Rule Dick/
you wanna floss well i'll pull out da mack and POP YA COLLA/
i got niggas that will kill ya family over 9 dollaz/
you will never catch me like 50 CENT claiming you'll get hurt/
but i aint fuckin wit you cus you like 2 BANG-EM-SMUF/
you about to get merked up like nas in belly/
and im gon be the nigga that roc ya head more than skullys/
make ya ass get jumped and i aint talkin bout a RABBIT GOING BOING/
ya ass get flipped like those 50 Cent COINS/
listen yo ass is really wastin my time/
my guns lock and pop more than ginuwine/
call me out we can settle this shit in the booth/
battalin me you must be a fool/
i'll drop ya ass than them niggaz failing out of school/

fuck man this shit was garbage lets go for round 2

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i mad some corrections to the verse

is it hard to get votes around here?

do u not have that 2 link rule or whutever?

not that i can vote anywaylol

TAH

ok good battle first i want to say that i hate murder inc so i loved this line

"ayo my defining of ill ness means you make me sick/
stop fucking wit the F.A.G.S and TAH go suck Ja Rule Dick/"

hard punch there even if i liked murder

TaH if u gotta explain yourself that much you know u need to make ya shit easier to read and comprehend... watch about stretchin' lines

Flow:The Unknown
Punches:The Unknown
Multis:Tah
Metas:Tah
Wordplay:Tie
Structure: The Unknown
Scheme: The Unknown

Overall Vote: The Unknown

good battle no beef or hate

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The Creation

i gotta give this to the unknown, pretty good punches, some weak ones but Tah had some confusing and stretched bars, work on your structure. i understood most of the wordplay tho.

vote- the unknown

ayo both of you hit this battle up... i need 2 more votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79185

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2votes me uppin dis shit
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ayo vote on my battle... how do u expect to sit there and vote on peoples battles and post links but when somebody else does it u dont do it for them... thats fucked up.

dont be a herb go hit my battle up... not that much to ask.

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breakdown

punches un
flow un
metas un
multies tah
personals both
consistancy un
worth readin both
overall unknown

hit dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78421

Vote- Unknown

Both MC's came really really hard, now TaH had it in more category's but Un had the punches and the flow. And as every MC knows those 2 are the ones that win battles. Good battle though.

Poll on this for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

yoooooooooooooo 4 vootes me
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