5 bars
you first
i set
no c h dr votes

alrite listen!

Im RAW like SUSHI pushin bullets like an uzi/
U Sayin u ILL but you spit BUBBLES like a JACUZZI/
Like a HURRICANE I “knock u off ur feet”/
You just fresh MEAT in the OVEN while im packin the HEAT/
GB bein buried alive, five feet bitch under the dirt/
Cos like vodka I leave you LEGLESS so ya shirt is a skirt/

I kill n make it hurt, u heard of violence?/
Im the definition open ya mouth n be left in silence/
Comin wiv MURDERS shud address me SERIAL/
I like things FRESH like milk from ya mums tits on my breakfast CEREAL/

Now you!

N quik! Match my time!

checkin in ill spit in a lil bit

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Aight check it

Like who wants to be a millionaire, im endin your life lines//
Send bullets through your mouth and head so your brain and jaw combine//

You spit gay shit like your eatin your boyfriends feces, physically//
Manslaughter is my middle name the way im killin these emcees lyrically//

Gettin "hard" and ejaculatin is the only "way" you beat tough dick//
Ill give you a 3rd degree burn from my "heat" to your face in "Miami" trick//

This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone//
DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn//

"Traces" of blood in puddles like unrehearsed Red Cross "magic" shows//
Punches leave you "lazy eyed" like nerve cells on sick days like retired hoes//

Explanations:

Tim Hardway played for the Atlanta Heat
Tracy (traces) McGrady is lazy eyed and plays or the magic

uppin fo votes (1)

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uppin fo votes (2)

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aight ima say dw takes this, heres my breakdown......

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-dw
wordplay-dw
punches-dw
personals-dw
overall-dw

props to the both of ya, but ima say dw takes this.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84864
itd be much appreciated.

peace.......

this was a sik battle ya'll came wit sum creative stuff.

Dw ya had sum witts. the 5th and 6th bar was comedy and had a great visual. the final bar had sum witts wit it too. i thought ya lacked sturcture though. ya verse did seem kinda rushed.

Gb ya verse was straight no real flaws. i thought explainin ya witts was kinda funny, but ya punches did hitt hard and ya flow as solid. Good Stuff

vote = GB22
quote:
This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone//
DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn//
^ kinda played, but funny none the less

uppin fo votes 3

can you poll vote please

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Gb ya verse was straight no real flaws. i thought explainin ya witts was kinda funny, but ya punches did hitt hard and ya flow as solid. Good Stuff

vote = GB2
This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone//
DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn/

the other kid had veeeeery played lines......vote to gb

can you two poll please

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I think GB got dis with harder hitting punches, the ejaculating line is played out tho

and his flow was a bit choppy

but the last 2 bars got my vote, on da real

Vote = GB2

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84006

aight thanks for votin man

please poll votes

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