5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
No crew, d/r votes...
No feeding...U kno tha rest...
Check in and than we drop, shouldnt matter who goes first cuz there's no feeding...

aight dawg.....checkin in...

i gues i will spit tomorrow due the day!
if thats okay for u....?

peace out!

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

aight dawg....here is my shit....

tha vision is ur name but its the wrong place at the wrong time cuz i am on a mission//
wrong decision to battle me cuz i make faggots ridiculous but i aint expect a recision//
with the provision that ure as wack as u seem i make u look like the pope in television//
man u spit such a crap that rap will stay nothin else for u than a fuckin vision//

u get a lyricall injection of my verses and ima make them turn in the direction of curses//
after that u will need a lot of nurses but i have to rap gently or u have to get used to hearses//
u think im a fiction..u would feel better..that u loose was a prediction..ya ass gets in a shredder//
dont let u feel better, i hunt u everyday im like god, u also got fear of pray, i dont let u walk head-up//

u try ure very best but ur verses aint heat, ure not strong enough and get locked down i a six feet deep//
ur last battles were all won by feed ...like: "u love boys dawg?-vote for me and we gonna meet"//
it was a failure to battle the MoF production......cuz i everytime aim a total destruction//
ima burst ur construction...ure out of function....dont battle me again shoulda be ure deduction//

are dead before u can start to swing.....ima let u leave this battle shocked like the dudes in "the ring"//
im workin on a lyricall sling, that sling makes u choking and ur ship is sinking cuz ya rhyms aint linking//
okay thats the end of my spit...i dont want no hate with u tha vision....cuz that would be shit//
ima leave u hit....perhaps u could have pretend this shame for u just with 2 words: "I quit!"//

__________________
turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

ohh what the fuck......

that looks shitty....i should have changed the size.....
and in line 13 is an "u" as the first word or letter missing...

peace!

__________________
turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

Shit, i forgot about this, imma write now............................................... ................................................

With shots on tha mark when I spark hitting tha left part of ya heart//
Fuck ya "bite" up when it "hits ya jaw" so "death starts when I bark"// *
What u think u hard cuz of that gun in ya avatar?//
"U can't see me", "Tha Vision leave u blind" and "mad at dark"//
Don't start, this fake bitch tryna act big cuz he uses "tenacious" words// **
"Making words," hoping people think they mistakened slurs// ***
MOF swear he creating verbs, now his words getting thinner//
And I'm still tryna figure out when glasses gave people splinters// ****
Since when did battles win cuz of "inners," u cant even "define ya rhymes"// *** and *****
U worked "full time" on ya verse and u still gonna leave with a "9 to 5"// ******

Explanations cuz there's a lot of personals in this shit and a few complex punches....
*I'm fucking his jaw up so he can't bite lines so now his rap career is over...
** He uses a lot of big words in his battles....
*** A line he used in one of his old battles and I never heard of or seen tha word "recitent" and I even looked in a couple of dictionaries and aint even find it...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85095
**** Another line he's used and tha line aint even make sense.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85095
***** He uses a lot of multies and rhyme schemes in his battles but his flow is off a lot and he has no real nice punches....
******His record at tha moment is 9-4 and Imma make it 9-5 and working a 9 to 5 job is full time....

uuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn nnn............................................... .

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yo tha vision......

what the fuck are u talkin about man?
u make urself ridiculous with ur shit!

now im battlin u and not crazy patient......?? i cant follow u....
are u so afraid of losin this battle?? cant u win with the punches in ur verse.....??

man thats really stupid and embarrassing! haha

__________________
turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

its explain tha personals u dumb fuck.....go on any other rap board and u will see tha same shit....u wacker than me so keep ya mouth shut....

nobody can be wacker than u........

but okay....believe what u wanna and get happy with that.....

but u gonna lose!

__________________
turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

uhh aight---mof ya had an ok flow, sum multi's, but real soft disses/punches---the vision ya had an aight flow, aight structure, couple ok punches---but the breakdown is not needed--still ya verse was harder then his and i can't see mof havin 9 wins but that's wut it says---vote=the vision

aight whatever.........

.................................please keep on votin................................

peace!

__________________
turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

this was a pretty nice battle

punches=tha vision
personals=tha vision
creativity=tha vision
structure=mof
flow=tie

my vote=tha vision

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85999