ok u drop first then ill give you an hour
then i'll go
im not that good so
lets finish today no matter what
i wont post if its not done today
reg rules
10 lines prefered

um...fix this shiznit first to a BATTLE...
then i'll spit...
then u'll spit...
then we shall be done...
good???

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oh shit my bad...^^^^^disregard....


anywayz...

mic-check
this cat from utah, so much hoop-lah i thought i was tha tha one who was new-but/
names game was to move up too quickly, but will lose to too many MC's who r used up/ ~lift me
strictly, u probably wanna get-wit me, so u can understand tha land of tha nifty/
but u got ur flows from a thrifty, just like 50, ur anotha Eminem dicky, see u at 60/ ~minutes
diminuative flows, no wonder ur too small to be in this, u could get stepped on by a midget/
go-go gadgets and gidgets, out comes a mic that starts dissin his own master, cause tha fucken thing won't listen/ ~to u
so wat u gonna do? act a fool, Luda would probably sue, and u'd be out of money, bankrupt, through/
who would've knew, this guy's face is blue, quit chockin on Adam's apple n give Eve a chew/ ~on it
got this child covered wit preteen condoms called baby-bonnets, still in tha crib, already dyin from cronic/
cause i blew in into ur noggin, now u thinkin of me like a comic, laughin ur ass off n pass out, wake up next to Bin Laden!/

simple if i do say so...

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melting threw like a manipulative, misery, machine...it's all good
nobody knows where ya from...u have stretched lines...no ''could''
let it be beatles u say...thought u liked rap? you a broken flood
what u wanna no me for? why did u say this n ya bio? cuz u mud
u say yer interests r freestyling? but u spelled freestyling wrong
i no it dont mean much...although you eat huge...beggin for slong
claiming 2 b a rapper end of story...yer mistaken...u have im sorry
what does the r stand for n ya name? angellica raped...yer done
now i no u about 2 have a nervous break down, stole ya emotions
quarterbacks increasing sacks & making take downs...no ''potion''

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AR..... work on ya flow...

you had good personals, did ya research about him being in utah!


i think that you came harder!

names good spit too!

( i dont even know yall)

lol vote- AR

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hey thanks for the honest vote kind lady
i wanted some feedback but i guess no one really cares n e more
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your verse was ok, you just need more multis and take out the "" and the ?s u know......... just to clean out ya flow....


thanx for not being mad at me when i voted i mean hey ppl might think differently


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what does the r stand for n ya name? angellica raped...yer done
now i no u about 2 have a nervous break down, stole ya emotions
quarterbacks increasing sacks & making take downs...no ''potion''
^^^ that was sick

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ok that explaines everything
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mic check, 1, 2, uppin, uppin, n uppin some more...
uppin numeral 1 thank u very much...
thanks for tha vote, lady...
yea, i don't flow for battles, wat can i say...?

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i think angel got this one easily-----names ya flow was all over the place--structure seemd aight but no real hard punches-------angel had betta disses-----vote=angel

peep my battle with doube0 in my sig and vote honest
thanxxxxxxx

uppin numeral 2...
check mine n i'll check urs...
come on naw, n don't forget to poll vote
like cut that is...

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opener:names
closer:tie
wordplay:Names
structure:Tie
punches:AR
overall:AR


nice battle y'all but angellic took this one, ar you need to work on your structure a lil dawg, ur lines are stretched. names u got nice wordplay, u jus need to elebate a lil nice drop both u guys, keep it up


aiight peace

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