10 lines
you first
no hate
reg rules
finish today or i wont show
you have several hours to spit

Nobody knows your name whats with the norwegian A?/
i'm a deface leave you nameless to a higher degree with nothing to say/
you give you ten lines i don't even need that but i'll take/
i'm not really a battle Mc but fuck it i'll fake it/
i never heard you spit so its hard to hit with personals/
but i hit hard so you'll wound and be constantly nursing those/
I never lost never one i'm new to the Rb scene just wanna battle some more/
sorry i got getta fame by leaving your name discraced, erased with scenes of gore/
cause i love how i hit a punchline everytime/
but this battle is stupid your probably already offline/

hidden n shadows...stay n the dark & eternaly castrade this verse
hitting n elbows...pierce ya throat & fatal wound...the open curse
u have nothing, even drugs like volume have energy & your worst
y use words like personals & punchlines...when u have no concept
yer like flames with no heat...u wont burn...this u will except
talkin bout gore? i'll snap off ya head...eat brain then explain
im a canabal...sick wit it runing with ya anatomy...u complain
just accept your finished & violated...u compare 2 nut stains
coming deranged & venom of insane...ya face a wrecked train
bloody ass tampon drips diped n syanide...these r yer remains

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verse 112 - flow was clean but just not enough venom in the punches for such simple wordplay

names - nice word play, n the punches nearer the end were coo

Vote = names

check my battle against poetic tendenceez

names took this in all aspects but verse's first line, that was ok, both need to step up game a lil, names is close to it...

not much of a decent battle but my vote goes to names...

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name took this

wordplay-names
punches-names
vocab-verse
strucutre-name

overall-names

peep my battle, we need honest votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91404

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hey dont forget bout me
i never forget bout u homie
lets close this with 3 more votes
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punches: names
flow: names
structure: names
multies: none
personals:none

vote: names
it was a one sided battle but both need to elivate a lil

peace