5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew, hate or d/r votes

explain all votes

check in and spit

checkin in



the beat starts



i fuckin hate you---i wish my words would rape you/

so i can send a message to h. lectur with details on how i ate you

did i mention your fake to/ you hate truth/ i feel bad for the bitch
THAT MADE YOU

e.coli --<<<< he gunna die/ six times with sick lines

that i write ------u gunn stay unsighned hype as long as you alive

your realize that my sty is nice as i continue to write -----your ass is mine tonight!!!!!!!!!!!aight

i aint good at text but i'll rip a mic/ rearange ya brain to flip ya lines/ grip it tight and squezze ya life till you die

my mind is tryin find the line to tear you apart with//
my minds like killar guerillas ravagen ya apartment
WHY"D you start this/ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH shit

nothin fantastic but if you read it with the beat i wrote it to its made ill
i should make this verse a audio LOL

aight here is my checkin i will drop in about 10 min

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s0rry for the freepost

1liner dont duck my battle

u have to spit now
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aight my bad playa !!!!!!!!!!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

aight here is a quick keystyle

he loves givin head...he thinks hes a blood cuz is ass is consistently red...
1liner stabbed himself wit a pencil to say he like 50 cent.....full of lead....
he made a dick dissappear in his mouth now he thinks hes magic like david blane....
he wants to be a terrorist....so he beat off on his first flight...
....so he could say he hi-JACK-ed on a plane....
like a blind kid tryin to shadow box....all ya punches miss....
1liner has a stomach ache...now he thinks he is spittin illness....
1liner loves whackness...if u dont have any wins then u are his hero....
damn kid youre not a loser..but like ya win percentage your a zero....
1liner put sugar in his mouth to say his rhymes were as sweet as mine....
all his punches missed me im ok....dont worry im fine...
...its just too bad i could have one this battle wit just this 1 line....

open for votes

yeah i no what u mean 1liner i want 2 do audio battles
but dont no anything really about it
i read some tips and stuff, just need some free time & money
when yer verse sounds ok on text can be made hard on audio
i no exactly what u mean
looking forward 2 this guys verse
goodluck i guess
i'll hit it up as soon as i get 100 posts
can someone check my battles out
names vs verse112>2-0
names vs copyrighted>0-0
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^^^^^please dont freepost...............it just clogs the thread............

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for real dawg we need votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

yeah 1 liner, this might have sounded better on audio.............

e.coli kinda had metas, punches and everything needed in text battles....not too bad...........check out my battl vs da kid or somebody....................

Not a bad battle
Opener: Coli
Closer: Coli
Flow: Coli
Personals: Coli
Punches: Coli
Winner: Coli
1liner- You had some good shit in your rhymes. keep it up. Maybe I'll battle ya in the near future. Can both of yall help me clear up some threads? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338

u got to poll vote cuz..............................

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my bad dawg. It's there now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338