go look at what i said in bitchslapped. answer that back i aint checking in yet,______________________

okay, i'm checking in now. cuz i'm going to sleep you check in too.

oneeeeeeeeee

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I haven't read what you said yet, but I'm checking in.

I'll prolly post up my verse tomorrow night if I get a chance. The deadline is just there so I make sure I get around to posting.

Child Abuse:
you haven't even won a battle, you don't wanna go with me,
son, all you do is lose battles, see your record sits at 0 and 3..
you spit elementary style rhymes, I'm 'bout to put 2 in ya wig,
and leave your ass flat on your back just like the dude in ya sig..
I don't even try and I got you shook, you're feeling all scary to rap,
I see it humorous you from the same place that I burried your dad..
people say that you're the wackest here, it's kinda true in my eyes,
this match's tribute to M. Jackson, saying there's no abuse is a lie..
my disses clot ya throat, I seen that bullshit you thought you wrote,
it's funny, only link in your sig is the only battle you ever got a vote..

Let the voting commence.

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All haul me. La la la, 100 characters is too much, bla bla bla.

Lmao. Excuse that last post, I'm baked as fuck, and it won't let me delete it.

Holy shit, marijuana is very, very good.

believe it's my turn.....

yo yo

i don't give a fuck bout your antics, just rememba you been struck by the outlandish
meta? i seen better metaphores in stores in greek language*
come to this i'm murderous, your all slow like the words from kiss*
thinking you the flyest, kno your the highest...i just turned a bird to a bitch
where the fuck my hoes at, nigga wuldn't be ill if you sniffed my bozack
i got the joke raps fold and snap like your group and you can quote that*
you can't even show for, being a 14 year old whore*
actually that's untrue, my grandma saw you...grabbed your dick and it tore
and on all fours, you a sick bastard but not in words
this battle's like, how i eat my pizza...can't stop dropping herbs*


*understand meta4's in greek(i don't think so)
*jada=kiss rhymes slow
*quote that(his crew)
*(he's 14 year's old that's his age)
*his occuption is your(my) grandma(lol)
*like my pizza with herbs and spices(he's getting eaten as a herb)

peace

Nice job Abuse. Seems like everybody loves their pillow now adays.

Vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote...

ok heres the breakdown...

vocab=meta
structure=tie
flow=tie
punches=meta
opener=meta
closer=tie
multis=noabuse (just)
creativity=tie
personnals=meta
overall=meta

quite a close battle but you seen where my votes at.....Pz

Thanks for the honest voting.

This 100 character bullshit is getting annoying. Blaaaaaaa Blaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!

vocab=meta
structure=tie
flow=Meta
punches=meta
opener=tie
closer=tie
multis=noabuse (just)
creativity=tie
personnals=meta
overall=meta

only catergorei no had was multis jus coz he had em
nice battle overall..jus looked like meta knew wot he was doin pz

OPener: Abuse
Closer: Meta
Flow: Meta
Personals: Meta
Punches: Meta
Win: Meta
Make your fuckin words biger Meta. Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93775

Thanks for the votes and critique.

I'd stop upping this battle, but it gets about one vote then gets sent to the third page, so don't mind me.