aight its all set up....spit yo shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................

checkin in first............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............

Look at this Eminem wannabe,trying to battle me/
Like Michael Jackson when he just turned white, Its about to get ugly/
This kids going after younger kids Like R.Kelly/
My lyrics is straight fire, got you singing"It's getting hot in herre" like nelly/
You like a fat chick,because your lyrics aint got no curves/
Just call me spider-man,because this wack kids getting on my nerves/
You like a rich kid in the ghetto,because you about to get jacked/
Just call Me Donathan Bailey,cause i''m about to rip up this track/
My lines will erase your bars off my screen like white-out/
You like a low powered light bulb,becuase it's LIGHTS OUT/

You made me wait that whole time and thats the best u can do?!/
people no my name but they see urs and say who?/
keep practicin lil man and u might get betta/
all them record labels u sendtracks into and u keep gettin the same letta/
sorry we jus dont got no room keep tryin/
they really mean "you suck dawg leave us alone"...cant u tell they were lyin/
i hope u dont plan on goin pro/
cuz if u do this where it ends....wit my flow/
get off this site and jus quit man ur ova/
cuz u jus ran into the bad ass...a.k.a. "the next h.o.v.a."

Damn both of yall need elevation harder vocab and methapors but i feel that mista raedar went harder than eminem simply because of the last puchline he had

both had good punches sum shyt didnt make sense but overall structure my vote goes to minis............................................. .....
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tied 1-1 in txt...1-0 in poll..............UppIn........................... ..........................................

METAPHORES - mista raedar
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - mista raedar
STRUCTURE - mista raedar
CREATIVITY - mista raedar
PERSONALS - mista raedar
OPENING - mista raedar
CLOSING - mista raedar
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - mista raedar

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uuuuuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn.... ............VOTES PLEASE............................................ ..

yo sum1 else vote...........................uuuupppiiinnnnn.... .................................................. .

uppin for the last time.....come on n vote.............................................. .................................................. ........................

punches: mr
flow: mr
personals: em
structure: mr
enjoyment: mr
vote: mr
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peace

yo uppin this shit yo only 2 more votes lets go................................................ .................................................. .....................

blah, weak battle but:

meta's: mr. had a couple...
multi's: niether...
flow: mr. , MMM had strecthed lines...
structure: same as flow...
punches: tie...
personals: none...
opener: tie...
closer: tie...

winner: Mister...

hit this up wit an honest vote:

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