8 lines max
No crew/hate/unexplained/BS/DR votes
I'll spit now you spit when ya can

Tökën, When I toke ya you'll be blazin: Smoken
Your spirit will be like ya muthafuckin neck: Broken/
This leader of the Black Ties is a waste of my time dude
Only time I'll wear black is after I Lyrikally Murder you/
At your funeral, You boyfriend might toss a rose on your grave
I'll be like Rambo dawg and toss a fuckin hand granade/
Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasure
A couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever

You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes)
You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists
You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you
Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew
You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette
You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments

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The Creation

Holy shit. Well both of these guys are my home boys so im gonna lay this out catergory based.

Punches: (Tie)
PersonalsTAG) I didn't see many personals from Token
Flow: (Token) took that by a little bit
OpeningToken) You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd sparkBut like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
ClosingTAG)Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasureA couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever
CreativityTAG) He got this catergory just because he used a few personals. Token had a few punches i've seen before where most of TAG's where personal so it was a little more creative.
Win: So overall after a close battle im gonna have to say my vote goes to TAG ( Hard decision )

lol sorry about all the faces I did : an ( so it came like dat .

He had closer? Sex lines are played as fuck man... what u smokin?.. i hate newbie votes... uppin 1..............

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Punches-Token
Flow-TAG
Peronsals-TAG
Wordplay-Token
Structure-Token [TAG / is bad]
Opener-TAG
Closer-Token

Overal-Token
Not a bad battle at all, Token dident really seem to give a shit, buth e still won, props.

Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89126

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thank you... you forgot to poll vote... uppin 2................................................. ...........

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The Creation

Well as i predicted Token Came out hard and Did his sdizzle

Tag you came better than normal but Tokens verse was str8 illness

Anyways Nice drops by Both

Vote=Token

Due 2 a entirely better verse

METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - Tökën
STRUCTURE - TAG
CREATIVITY - Tökën
PERSONALS - TAG
OPENING - TAG
CLOSING - Tökën
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - TAG

OVERALL - TAG (Close battle though)

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

Opener-TAG
pucnhes-Token
flow-TAG
structure-token
wordplay-token
closer-Token

Good Battle -.-Token Came Harder.. Props to both

That shouldnt count. Its a big time hate vote haha good luck token and TAG .

FlowTag
Personals Token
Punches Token
Metas Tag
Creativity Token
Enjoyment Tag

I would say a tie but it has to go one way or the other

Vote=Tag

Opener-tag
Closer-token
Punches-token
Flow-tag
Peronsals-tag
Wordplay-token
Structure-token
overall-TOKEN

nice batte peeps but thats my breakdown of the battle.


plz return the favor and vote for the battle in my sig!!!

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