8-9 bars (16-18 lines)

No-Hate
No-d/r
No-Crew
No-feeding
No-biting
No-Recycling
No-1 line votes

you spit 1st, you have 20min after checkin
i got another 20 after you..

All Votes Must Be Explained In Detail...

Good Luck!!!

Checking In...

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.........who the fuck do you think you are kid?

if you wanna battle me than your wack ass is spittin first

what ever.. stop you bitching.. give me 20min....

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Walter Wall?, my punches land hard enough to make
texas three states. uppercuts will leave ya chest in
v-shapes, as i hand you an L in a circle, like the winner
of a lexus-sweepstakes, I'll even
rip your eyes backwards so you can't look forward to this loss
like contemporary priests I'm already bored with this Cross
this bitch couldn't serve me fresh lines if he ordered some floss
like porn vets in virgin roles..you're only
Acting Tight, resurrect your life like Christ,
just so I can come and kill you twice
I'm always prevailin so every time you'll be failin
its like trying to Crucify yourself, you won't get the last nail in
im smackin this kid till his head
is turned..360 degrees, ya strategy will never work, cuz
ya loss record will be equivalent to the number of emcees
that RB has registered..


(finisher)
Verbally harassing walter I am forced to enforce his debt because
this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best
I sever chests from necks and hips that are used for mad slaps and fag-biz, I could smack with jizz and FILLET this FISH.

where i said:

"im smackin this kid till his head
is turned..360 degrees" - look at his avatar

where i said:

"this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating
and battle the best" - look and read his sig..

Call'n me out?............must of misheard your information
cuz here ure cum'n up shorter than midgit masturbation
Checked ya profile, 57 posts a day? you must be joking
The last time you dropped a hot bar, ure feet got soapy
Im a laugh and relax as I take it easier than bake oven
Cuz kid can't spell, whats he gonna show me 5umthin?
Ya havent heard of structure vocab or multis apparently
Got no chance of the vote, Im facing emcee alan keyes!
So as I keep............my fly rhymes presidentially inclined
U stay wack and 'matched'.......'taken out' with 10 lines!

vote on this battle
and do it right

flow -
structure -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -

5hifty - That was a decent verse. You had I think about 2 punches in there that landed really nice. They wernt played or anything. The structure, and rhyme scheme could use a little work. But thats nothing time cant do for ya...

Walter Wall - I dont know if this is as good as you are, maybe a bad day. But I wasnt feeling ya verse to much, I felt things were forced to much. You had 1 really good punch in there. But alot of the time, it doesnt match with multiple punches. Your flow was good and all of that. Structure was straight, maybe make a better rhyme scheme...

Because of the punches Vote - 5hifty

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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Personals- Walter
Punches- Tie
Multies- 5hifty
Flow- Walter
Vocab- Walter
Wordplay- Tie
Overall- Walter

Synapsis- Ok... Battle was ok... Looks closer on stone than what it really was... 5hifty you need to work on your structure cause readin' yer shit was a pain... but other than that... both of em were str8... Pz

^fuck'n dickryders

I love frontlines, lol

punches is one of 5 categories

learn how to vote homie

then come back

that was directed at high class

wil getcha knows how to vote

Personals
Flow
Punches
Wordplay
Vocab
Structure
Multis

^all should be in your vote

shifty had an overall better verse, he had more complex punches and wrdplay. Walter had an aight spit, one or two good punches but nothing too hard or witty. Vote 5hifty




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seriously, go back to somewhere else.

feeble

flow - walter
structure - walter
multis - shifty
punches - walter.......just showed utter disrespect for shifty....made him look foolish......elementary punches that hit harder than the complex shit he spit.....
wordplay - tie

vote - walter.............

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