10 Lines
Regular Rules
Due 2Morrow

i said 14 lines in the thread.....

and due tomorrow night at 10 Pm Eastern Time...

^^ That cool wit you?

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Yea watever ... Go 14 ... Im still goin' 10 ... Peace ... Grr ... I hate this 100 character shit ... Enough ?

Hmmm ... Let's see wat I can come up wit ...

I'll murder you !! ... Um no wait that's been played for some time
But fucc it I seen ur skills and figured I could waste a couple of lines
Hope U prayed a couple of times - Cuz Dia your gonna need it
U got good chances receivin' votes for ur verse ... As long as people don't read it
Defeated ? Not yet cuz I told myself I'd spread it out in ten bars
Cuz kid drops so much horse shit Im startin' to believe he's a centaur
Im surprised U got this far Kid still has trouble stickin' to the basics
His crew is The Agents ... Guess U can call me Neo from the Matrix
Man juss face it - Dialect, MeNTiLL ... Dialect, MeNTiLL - There's no comparsion
And seein' ur custom title backwards -
Is the only way people would bother readin' ur nareteV's

There U go ... 10 so drop ur verse man ... Peace

Haha...You Funny....Heres Alittle News For Ya Ass

This dudes personals are fake like him actin big
The agents...I aint wit em, dont u see DOI in my sig

iight...

Yo Look...

Spit ya fake fabels,my blade'll leave your face labeled
Beat me!jus like superman naked your not Cape Able
Mentill ya cant win, so don't take it hard when u lose
Cuz sportsmanships not a tennis game Carnival cruise
Mentill is Mentally ill, shook ya so bad I caused turrets
U be scrambling 4 u life like imprisoned breakfast chef
The fact is, Dogg I could kill you wit ya own wackness
Herb, u more turncoat then da nike reversible jackets
Already dead, you would still get killed if u prewrite it
Ya punches are like the college BCS,wit out the C in it
DD'd,Dead from Drop,rainbowed too like his blue balls
Jacked ya thinkn cap but useless,it wa 5 sizes to small
You aint goin back home,like a captured secret assassin
I woulda droped sooner,but I cant type when im laughin

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Oohhhh....
Nice Battle

Punches-MeNTiLL
Personals-Celestial Dialect
Wordplay-Celestial Dialect
Vocab-Neither
Enjoyable-Celistial Dialect
Originality-MeNTiLL

Overal Vote-Celistial Dialect

No hate
But I was simply Feelin Celistial's verse more

"This dudes personals are fake like him actin big
The agents...I aint wit em, dont u see DOI in my sig"

HAHAHA

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Dont kno why
But it didn't let me poll vote....??
Anyways I'll talk to Axe or Feeble
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opener C
closer C...made me laugh good job
punches C harder
wordplay Mentill
personals C
overal C

no hate
peace

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Aight ... I'll take it away for you ... I was juss sayin' ... Well U read ... So fucc it ... Let the people vote ...

hate vote. . it doesnt count. -feeble
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)

I took it away

Mentill thank you for takin away ya swaying and Feeble thank you for takin away deacons hate vote

UPPPIN UPPIN UPPINN UPPINN UPPINN UPPIN UPPIN

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^^^ umm where was there hate....do you think im would lower myself to your level and have actual beef over a computer screen...hahha funny my vote remains....give me an aim we can chat....friend

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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)

Dont really know both of ya'll cats but Deacon's vote dint look too clever....
anyways
Mentill-you had some really nice concepts etc but they really dint hit that hard..you obviously can spit heat but it looked effortless in this battle and you dint come hard enuf..

Celest-Looked a bit scripted but you did have some nice wordplay and your flow and structure was well kept.

BREAKDOWN---
Punches-Tie
Structure-C
Flow-C
Enjoyment-Mentill
Metas-C
Effort-C
Sustainment-C
Overall-C
Nice battle but Effort and Metas took it for me

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

^^^^clever.....you must not know me well......

good day-----note I am the agents---make a note on that......

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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)