10-20 lines
30 min to drop
no free posting
no d/r crew hate votes
good luck

ayo youngheadreckers rap anaylasis cant defeat this\
his lines left out like lettuce to eat it, its not crisp\

now this is how you perform a true diss\
to inflict massive pain to you wannabe antagonist\

after youll spit your shit ill laugh and hinder\
wack lyrics are a sign of hunger nigga, grab a snickers\

even if i was mute i would defeat you easily\
telekenisis structured to defeat you fake emcees\

i cant beleive you would cum spit so weak\
limp shit like that sucumbs to weak seeds\

blowing out hot air bitch , get off ya knees\
lectures like these are hard pressed, but please\

you wanna stick me in a heasrse , i think not\
im spittin shit way beyond one hundred nautical knots\

like don knots, you better leave this to the beaver\
im spittin the heater dogg , you just a retreiver\

the cleverest emcee , known to warm up fevers\
cleaving hearts out so i can releive ya\

your journey ends here kid so dont even spit\
two forks in the road , both lead to eternal bliss\

dont ever come to me spittin this junk\
come back anotha time before i spit a sicker line chump\




11 bars is aight

i'm the best son to win this ya gonna need help: hit f1/
i'm next to none while your bendin words and forcin disses/
you beating me is like windows supporting linux/
cuz your the reason i'm supportin abortion clinics/
You could vomet in my eye and I still wouldn't see your sickness/
Tha doctor said cant circumsize a 2incher well now hes dickless/
Knock you unconcious wit balled fist, throwin ya skeleton in a dark pit/
Make you swallow toilet water and dare you to talk shit/
What happen to yo pre-write you musta misplaced it/
Ya bars make about as much sense as a color blind raciest/
YOU BETTER ASK FAM TO CLOSE THIS SECTION CUZ IM RIPPIN OUT YOUR MID SECTION/
YOU WORSE THAN AL GORE, YOU SAY FUCK DA VOTES I WANT A WHOLE RE-ELECTION/
Ya verse are like celeberty parties, hard to get into/
Only chance you have of gettin signed is if you got a tatto/
Clonein yaself wouldn't help you get a 'double you'/(W/Win)
Youll think this is a 'drug bust' tha way 'blood will spew'/
Deteach one of ya legs and make you 'run a way' like a super model/
Ya flow wouldn't be spicey if you stole lines from a romance novel/
You'll get beat as if I had a palm full of lotion/
Like anthrax victims this nigga right here is very scared of postin/

Explain: U hit F1 on most progs for help
2. Windows linux = diff systems
3. Color blind man cant see colors so why be racist?
4. Ask "Fam" to close this Fam being the whole moderating Family. (Also I thought that was the coldest verse i through down)

Good luck let the votes decide

very one sided battle in favor of Yung
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every catagory goes 2 yung...............................
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Uppin fa votes..... .

i agree with 1liner....this battle is a landslide.....Yung had better vocab, punches, metas, and rhymescheme.....Hard only had the structure in this battle...no need for a breakdown because Yung got every category except for structure....good read from u both though.....no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

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yung hit the hardest$ nicer punches, wordplay was decent,
disses hit harder, good flow

hard one punches did'nt hit as good$$disses were soft,
he was ite but just did'nt come as hard

i give this battle to hard one, better rhyme scheme, better wordplay, and about equal flow, but he hit harder

T-rex is riding some major dick right there...how the hell...anyway..no personals = loss.....hard-one...no personals...= losss....rhyme was ok, but obviously pre-written and shit...stupid ass bitch.....hit the link up yung

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99123

Uppin for a couple more votes .

yo yung got this because of the fact that he spit, anything would of beat that

good shit yung u won cuz of better punches and personals

hit this up wit votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99005

and my battle in the frontlines