6-8 lines

no hate votes/ biting or recycelying

simple rules

check in and drop when you can

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KAUTIOUS

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^ thats not what we agreed on ^

but now that you pre-wrote, I'll stillserve your ass..........................................

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yo don't mean to freepost, but yall better read the new rules... 10 line minimum.

pz... and good luck

He said it 10 line minimum. Due Whenever.......................................... .................................................. ...................................

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yea aight 10 line
due asap im keying it up now

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KAUTIOUS

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Kautious with a 'K', damn I guess this kids krazy//(1)
but I'm nautious cuz thats played, now he think's he's gon' faze me//(2)
How you change'n the rules, so it will benifit your style?//(3)
but I'm still hang'n them fools, so admit it, you's in denial//(4)
so as you choke on this shit, cuz you can barley even rap//(5)
why don't you smoke on this dick, and kiss on my hairy ass?//(6)
sorry, jus look'n for laughs cuz I can't take you serious//(7)
but you still shook'n shit in those pants, ya moms gonna be furious//(8)
I hate to end it so soon, when I was just get'n started//(9)
but I ain't gon'elevate battle'n you, cuz your just too retarded//(10)


sorry that was like a record for me........5minutes 43seconds

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-intro-
Description of a killing, my verse prescribes another death...
thinking of fatal ways that i could just "steal away your breath"
a method where u "get blow(n)" away like inhaling lines of crystal meth...

-verse-

Why do u north idiots surround me, another canadian rapper to dismantel...
you'll get "tuned" to have "flashbacks" like i was changing the channel...
RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” "my offense"...
I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense...
RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” in my offense...
I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense...
Look Princess if your verse is hot then I must be seeing it as pretense...
Don’t give your rhymes “thought”; giving so much “brain” you probably got no sense...





explanations: "tuned" means fixed beat up. fucked
the link: was a canadian thinking he was the best one on the site
y'all should get the rest



i dunno if i threw a extra line in their and if i did then you can to

also the way i did the verse might hurt the structure, but any way drop it

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

what the fuck, why did it repeat it.s self ... lmao i must of put the line in their 2wice,,


i gotta fix dat!!!!!

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

-intro-
Description of a killing, my verse prescribes another death...
thinking of fatal ways that i could just "steal away your breath"
a method where u "get blow(n)" away like inhaling lines of crystal meth...

-verse-

Why do u north idiots surround me, another canadian rapper to dismantel...
you'll get "tuned" to have "flashbacks" like i was changing the channel...
RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” "my offense"...
I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense...
Look Princess if your verse is hot then I must be seeing it as pretense...
Don’t give your rhymes “thought”; giving so much “brain” you probably got no sense...







explanations: "tuned" means fixed beat up. fucked
the link: was a canadian thinking he was the best one on the site
y'all should get the rest



i dunno if i threw a extra line in their and if i did then you can to

also the way i did the verse might hurt the structure, but any way drop it

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

ok.......................then.
uh.....nice verse
uh.....nice verse

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man i fucked up my verse... o well, uppinf for votes

also can y'all click that link for my other battle to be voted on

thanks

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Opener: Tie
Punches: tie
Personals: Canuck
Vocab: Kaut
Wordplay: Kaut
Flow:Kaut
Closer: Canuck
Close battler but overall = Kautious because he had originals

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need those poll votes


uppin for votes

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Kautiouse....what u think is wordplay isn't-same with canuck on his first line......

I read thru an felt canuck's verse was very simplistic filled wit childish threats....which i guess u could categorize as punches....

Kautiouse kept quoting "things"....for what reason I dont know....but other than that it had sum decent flow and some O.K. met4's......

to me this is difficult for me to decide......
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..............well....Ima have to go with canuck......as simplistic as it was...it seemed to me that he was geared more torwards a battle verse.....kautiouse....u'r alot better than what u shown here....try an stay on base a lil bit more though...u got all caught up in your wordplay......

vote-canuck