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No D/R Votes.
No Have Votes.

Axe, Chrit, Walter Wall, and Aisle 5 Can't vote..

Crew Votes Allowed since we both an Executive..

Good luck homie.

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*His sons name is Mario*
*His custom title says KING*

Alright i'm ready now...

Like minimized memory banks.. Your mind has small value
..You'd think I was a cannible the way i'll Disembowel you
I'll smack the crown off your head and put you in place
..Your life will end up darker than the race of the slaves
I'll dethrone this King and place a crown of thorns on his vain head
..And kill all your thoughts of W's and declare you brain dead
Hey dad! How's Mario handling being the son of a goomba?
You'll end up betrayed by him..
..Because you're King.. And in the end Mario slays Koopa
I've been cutting your ass... And I don't even own a knife
So i'll place a period at the end...
...Just to boldly mark the end of your life.

Your life has ended..
*bows head*

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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.:.:Brooklyn Get Up:.:.

Tyme 2 Earn My Respect

My Mans Started A Crew Of Nuttin But Rookies
Start Keepin Ur Thoughts Inside Like Fortune Cookies
Call My Punches Leggo's The Way I Leave Ur Brains In The Block
Only Token He Got Is >1 Way 2 My Cock
Ill Throw Ur Corpse Off The Bridge So U Can Fall~ 2~ Pieces
You Stuck On Ur Comp More Den Blood 2 Leeches
BeaT Token Up Wit Pipes Cuz Now He Wanna Be In ~Sink (Nsync-Together)
Tokens Home Security Blowing Up Still Wouldnt Put Him In A Brink
Like Cookie Jars Round Fat Bitches U Gonna B Left Hollow N Topless
Even If U Was My Hat U Still Couldnt Top This

Shut Down Mouths......

Opener: Token
Punches: Envy
Personals: Token
Wordplay: Tie
Vocab: Neither stood out too much
Flow: Token
Structure: Envy
Closer: Damn this one was close but ima give it to Token
Overall: Close battle but I think token came out on "top"

nice battle..... best one i've read today

punches-close....envy
personals-token
opener-token
closer-token......nice....envys...was good too
flow-envy
wordplay-envy.....by a lil
creativity-tie...

damn close battle..... but im give it to envy....cuz of punches and wordplay

hit this battle up plz.......i took tha time on yours...peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98469

I dont think this was very close at all.....
to be honest...token came very weak in my opinion-
I saw his verse before envy even dropped an i said to myself...
"hmmmm envy gonna have to screw up big time to lose this one"

Infact i was right and wrong at the same time.....
He didnt screw anything up...at all...which made him pretty much run away with this one....

he had better personals,flo,meti4's and wordplay-
I was expectin a good battle here....but token choked....
Maybe next time......

vote- envy ny

Like minimized memory banks.. Your mind has small value
Decent wordplay, ok punch
..You'd think I was a cannible the way i'll Disembowel you
Nice wordplay, no punch at all
I'll smack the crown off your head and put you in place
Nice personal
..Your life will end up darker than the race of the slaves
Eh...so so wordplay, not much of a punch
I'll dethrone this King and place a crown of thorns on his vain head
So-so personal, some unecessary filler, weak punch
..And kill all your thoughts of W's and declare you brain dead
It rhymed, that's about it. Couldn't see tha wordplay or punch
Hey dad! How's Mario handling being the son of a goomba?
Good personal, nice punch
You'll end up betrayed by him..
..Because you're King.. And in the end Mario slays Koopa
Good wordplay, kinda weak cuz it's video games, so, decent punch
I've been cutting your ass... And I don't even own a knife
So i'll place a period at the end...
...Just to boldly mark the end of your life.
Ok wordplay, decent closer, but really, no punch


My Mans Started A Crew Of Nuttin But Rookies
Nice personal, but a self punch cuz it's your crew too
Start Keepin Ur Thoughts Inside Like Fortune Cookies
Nice wordplay, but no punch
Call My Punches Leggo's The Way I Leave Ur Brains In The Block
Good wordplay, again, no punch
Only Token He Got Is >1 Way 2 My Cock
Decent name diss and wordplay
Ill Throw Ur Corpse Off The Bridge So U Can Fall~ 2~ Pieces
Eh wordplay, mild punch
You Stuck On Ur Comp More Den Blood 2 Leeches
Could have used an explanation (post count?), kinda played meta, so-so punch
BeaT Token Up Wit Pipes Cuz Now He Wanna Be In ~Sink (Nsync-Together)
Good wordplay, Nsync is pretty played though, decent punch
Tokens Home Security Blowing Up Still Wouldnt Put Him In A Brink
Good wordplay on Brink's, good punch
Like Cookie Jars Round Fat Bitches U Gonna B Left Hollow N Topless
So-so wordplay and meta, kinda played concept, but nice twist, decent punch
Even If U Was My Hat U Still Couldnt Top This
Played!

There's the real deal right there...

Envy barely takes this, but does cuz he simply connected more and harder.

Peace

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Pretty Good Battle From Both Of You I Gotta Say, Token Threw Lots Of Personals At EnVy But EnVy Had Alot Of Wordplay And A Few Personals Himself, BUT A Majority Of His Wordplay Was Old Which Took Away The Effect Of His Punches

Opener - EnVy Ny (Bastard, LoL)
Closer - Token
Punches - Token
Personals - Token
Vocab - EnVy Ny
Structure - Token
Overall - Token Got This In My Opinion With Just Better And Up To Date Hits

Vote - Token

Sorry I Cant Poll You Guys But Fuck It

^ Bah Uppin
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Envy Ny won this.

Reasons, Token came dissapointingly weird, I was expecting something more for some reason, I'm cool with you Token, I just guessed you had a bad spell, But Envy came with some good wordplay, one or two nice meta's, Flow was equal by both,

Pz

yo i think envy took this because of better punches flow wordplay and metafors

the fortune cookie line was nice lmao

and to token...u had better personals but u could do much better than that

no hate

my vote goes to envy ny

i took the time so please return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99542

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309

thanks good battle