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Se7eN v.s LM
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ayo, iight rules
16 lines you spit first and 1 day time limit so drop ya shit homeboy |
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I'll drop as soon as I think of somethin.......................................... .. Goodluck dawg.............................................. ................................... Peace!!! |
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Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools...
With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules... You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me... Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially... I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats... And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats... You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say... And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay... Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit... Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet... Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye... Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile... I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline... It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time... Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck... And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook... EXPLANATIONS line 2 - sig line 3 - thug man in his check in line 4 - name:se7en = movie line 11 - profile line 12 - avatar line 13 - rules line 16 - his crew |
ayo, dawg
Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin' True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down" |
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LM u gotta up some too, come on please vote people don't sleep on it, Uppin' x 2***************************** *** *** *
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uppin' x3
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come on people don't sleep on this battle please VOTE...... Uppin' x4...******************************** *** *** + *
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~LM~
Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools... With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules... It was ok, nice little personal, bad opener You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me... Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially... Flow fell off, nice try though, almost reall good I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats... And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats... 1st line was nice, 2nd was weak. getting there You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say... And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay... Wack, and ebay lines are played Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit... Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet... Again almost somthing, but came out wack Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye... Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile... PLayed line, and you get em in your avy... hmm I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline... It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time... wasnt even a punch, cmon now... Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck... And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook... flow fell off, and a bad closer conclusion A weak verse, I have seen much better from you. alot of your punches were played, and the ones that had potential. Fell off at the end. This could have been worded better, and been more creative... 4/10 Se7eN Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat pretty played, and bad opener I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin' Pretty nice, good flow... an acual punch True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick a punch, but no wit and cae weak But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass This started off nice, but fell off, nice try. Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately Weak, and should have been a punch So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole Weak, played, and not a good punch I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence This was alright, nice little punch here I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down" it was ok, but a bad closer though Conclusion Most of your punches were weak, but you did have a couple that were pretty good. Some of them seemed to start off real ILL, but fell off. Your elevating pretty fast. Some ok wordplay, and okay vocab... This was alright I guess... Vote - Se7eN Full Conclusion Punches win battles, that is a fact and im sticking with it. LM, to many of your punches were played. If they wernt as played, you would have had my vote with eas. Se7en had some weak punches and shit. But he did have a couple that were pretty good. Bothhad alright wordplay. LM concentrated on his flow to much, thats what I think. LM, work on your vocab. That can help, and I can already tell Se7eN is working on it. Both need to elevate. But dont we all... |
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that explains my thoughts exactly......... vote-Se7en yea now its ur job to return a honest vote on my battle vs. petrafy... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102431 link^^^........return the favor honestly........... |
LM :
Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools... With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules... not a bad opener... You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me... Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially... nothing special... 5/10 I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats... And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats... ok, getting some punches in there You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say... And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay... played but ok Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit... Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet... saying someone is gay is played too unless you do it creatively Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye... Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile... ok personal because of the avatar I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline... It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time... ok Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck... And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook... weak rhyme seven: Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat not a bad opener... creative I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin' weak True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick filler - played shit But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass ? Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately filler So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole don't feel it I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down" weak closer All in all I'd give it to LM for having less filler and better punches. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069 |
very easy to vote. Se7en......i dont know man......ur punches dont hit/make sense/arent clever.....u have potential..just get smarter with it. u got the flow man..now just get whitty. LM i liked a couple of ur lines.....the one about the rules was ill....u came straight......didnt have to com emuch harder then u did to take out seven. good battle.
vote: LM |
oh yeah. and Se7en fucking is guilty of FEEDING. that shits major herb styles............................................ ..........................................
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Opener:Se7en
Closer:LM Flow:LM Enjoyment:LM Punches:Tie Vote:LM No beef ova this thought bcus it was a good battle! Return the favour on this please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103895--vs. aragorn |
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