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LM 5 83.33%
Se7eN 1 16.67%
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Old 01-03-04, 07:18 PM   #1
Se7eN
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Se7eN v.s LM

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ayo, iight rules

16 lines
you spit first and 1 day time limit

so drop ya shit homeboy
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Old 01-03-04, 07:28 PM   #2
LM
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Check in................................................ ...........................................
I'll drop as soon as I think of somethin.......................................... ..
Goodluck dawg.............................................. ...................................

Peace!!!
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Old 01-03-04, 07:33 PM   #3
Se7eN
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iight ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
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Old 01-03-04, 07:59 PM   #4
LM
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Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools...
With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules...
You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me...
Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially...
I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats...
And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats...
You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say...
And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay...
Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit...
Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet...
Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye...
Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile...
I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline...
It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time...
Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck...
And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook...


EXPLANATIONS
line 2 - sig
line 3 - thug man in his check in
line 4 - name:se7en = movie
line 11 - profile
line 12 - avatar
line 13 - rules
line 16 - his crew
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Old 01-03-04, 09:04 PM   #5
Se7eN
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ayo, dawg

Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat
This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat

I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description
Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin'

True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch
You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick

But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class
LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass

Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady
Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately

So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold
I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole

I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense
Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence

I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground
LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down"
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Old 01-03-04, 09:06 PM   #6
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iight uppin' for votez x1 ************************************************** ************************************************** *
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Old 01-04-04, 11:33 AM   #7
Se7eN
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LM u gotta up some too, come on please vote people don't sleep on it, Uppin' x 2***************************** *** *** *
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Old 01-04-04, 12:05 PM   #8
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uppin' x3
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Old 01-04-04, 02:13 PM   #9
Se7eN
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come on people don't sleep on this battle please VOTE...... Uppin' x4...******************************** *** *** + *
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Old 01-04-04, 02:41 PM   #10
High Class
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~LM~
Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools...
With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules...
It was ok, nice little personal, bad opener
You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me...
Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially...
Flow fell off, nice try though, almost reall good
I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats...
And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats...
1st line was nice, 2nd was weak. getting there
You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say...
And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay...
Wack, and ebay lines are played
Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit...
Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet...
Again almost somthing, but came out wack
Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye...
Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile...
PLayed line, and you get em in your avy... hmm
I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline...
It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time...
wasnt even a punch, cmon now...
Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck...
And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook...
flow fell off, and a bad closer

conclusion
A weak verse, I have seen much better from you. alot of your punches were played, and the ones that had potential. Fell off at the end. This could have been worded better, and been more creative... 4/10


Se7eN
Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat
This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat
pretty played, and bad opener
I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description
Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin'
Pretty nice, good flow... an acual punch
True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch
You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick
a punch, but no wit and cae weak
But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class
LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass
This started off nice, but fell off, nice try.
Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady
Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately
Weak, and should have been a punch
So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold
I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole
Weak, played, and not a good punch
I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense
Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence
This was alright, nice little punch here
I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground
LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down"
it was ok, but a bad closer though

Conclusion
Most of your punches were weak, but you did have a couple that were pretty good. Some of them seemed to start off real ILL, but fell off. Your elevating pretty fast. Some ok wordplay, and okay vocab... This was alright I guess...

Vote - Se7eN

Full Conclusion
Punches win battles, that is a fact and im sticking with it. LM, to many of your punches were played. If they wernt as played, you would have had my vote with eas. Se7en had some weak punches and shit. But he did have a couple that were pretty good. Bothhad alright wordplay. LM concentrated on his flow to much, thats what I think. LM, work on your vocab. That can help, and I can already tell Se7eN is working on it. Both need to elevate. But dont we all...
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Old 01-04-04, 02:48 PM   #11
Virtuoso
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Quote:
~LM~
Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools...
With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules...
It was ok, nice little personal, bad opener
You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me...
Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially...
Flow fell off, nice try though, almost reall good
I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats...
And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats...
1st line was nice, 2nd was weak. getting there
You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say...
And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay...
Wack, and ebay lines are played
Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit...
Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet...
Again almost somthing, but came out wack
Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye...
Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile...
PLayed line, and you get em in your avy... hmm
I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline...
It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time...
wasnt even a punch, cmon now...
Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck...
And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook...
flow fell off, and a bad closer

conclusion
A weak verse, I have seen much better from you. alot of your punches were played, and the ones that had potential. Fell off at the end. This could have been worded better, and been more creative... 4/10


Se7eN
Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat
This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat
pretty played, and bad opener
I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description
Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin'
Pretty nice, good flow... an acual punch
True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch
You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick
a punch, but no wit and cae weak
But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class
LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass
This started off nice, but fell off, nice try.
Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady
Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately
Weak, and should have been a punch
So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold
I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole
Weak, played, and not a good punch
I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense
Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence
This was alright, nice little punch here
I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground
LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down"
it was ok, but a bad closer though

Conclusion
Most of your punches were weak, but you did have a couple that were pretty good. Some of them seemed to start off real ILL, but fell off. Your elevating pretty fast. Some ok wordplay, and okay vocab... This was alright I guess...

Vote - Se7eN

Full Conclusion
Punches win battles, that is a fact and im sticking with it. LM, to many of your punches were played. If they wernt as played, you would have had my vote with eas. Se7en had some weak punches and shit. But he did have a couple that were pretty good. Bothhad alright wordplay. LM concentrated on his flow to much, thats what I think. LM, work on your vocab. That can help, and I can already tell Se7eN is working on it. Both need to elevate. But dont we all...




that explains my thoughts exactly.........

vote-Se7en

yea now its ur job to return a honest vote on my battle vs. petrafy...

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link^^^........return the favor honestly...........
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Old 01-04-04, 03:05 PM   #12
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LM :

Dawg you've gotta be #1 in the list of rb's fucked up fools...
With 3 dq's you must be too stupid to understand the rules...
not a bad opener...
You use a thug man to believe your cool but your not, trust me...
Coz when your named after a movie you aint known socially...
nothing special... 5/10
I dont talk boastfully but atleast my wins double my defeats...
And dawg you should be banned, he's got 3 wins coz he cheats...
ok, getting some punches in there
You battle to beats and still cant find a flow and punches to say...
And you need help to battle, you search for punches on ebay...
played but ok
Plus you pay for votes, here you've already left a deposit...
Now admit your secretly gay, come out the mutherfuckin closet...
saying someone is gay is played too unless you do it creatively
Read this, you cant flip or toss it and you claim not to freestlye...
Well bitch face it, you cant battle either so you aint em in 8mile...
ok personal because of the avatar
I write this and have fun all the while, you put 24 hour deadline...
It's coz you cant think of shit from the top, well take your time...
ok
Why are you here, you cant even rhyme, mutherfucker you suck...
And you couldnt improve your vocab if I gave you a textbook...
weak rhyme

seven:
Hi I'm Se7eN, you must be a real emcee, I have 2 beat
This guy is more mixed up, than a nun who carries heat
not a bad opener... creative
I'll beat you into submission, till you don't have any description
Hurry up and post betta shit, instead of personals and bitchin'
weak
True, I got 3 DQs in this online shit, but you got 2 be a bitch
You should explain 2 everyone one how you suck and fuck dick
filler - played shit
But Promise Land my ass, my shit cuts 5x betta than fiber class
LM, u can't be real, or else somebody real needs 2 hide ya ass
?
Em from 8 mile, this bitch must of gone crazy, or I went shady
Cause I've been fucking up emcees juss like this bitch lately
filler
So you like getting told, I'll have 2 put ya on a long ass hold
I can't believe I battled a gay guy, wit a 24 inch wide asshole
don't feel it
I got betta people 2 spit against, so u ain't a sweat or suspense
Your so dumb 2 keep you inside wackness, you put up a fence
I'm done wit this clown, I put him 6 1/2 feet under the ground
LM can be called, BD, meaning the bitch juss got "bitched down"
weak closer

All in all I'd give it to LM for having less filler and better punches.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069
 
Old 01-04-04, 04:08 PM   #13
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very easy to vote. Se7en......i dont know man......ur punches dont hit/make sense/arent clever.....u have potential..just get smarter with it. u got the flow man..now just get whitty. LM i liked a couple of ur lines.....the one about the rules was ill....u came straight......didnt have to com emuch harder then u did to take out seven. good battle.

vote: LM
 
Old 01-04-04, 04:09 PM   #14
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oh yeah. and Se7en fucking is guilty of FEEDING. that shits major herb styles............................................ ..........................................
 
Old 01-04-04, 05:12 PM   #15
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Opener:Se7en
Closer:LM
Flow:LM
Enjoyment:LM
Punches:Tie
Vote:LM
No beef ova this thought bcus it was a good battle!
Return the favour on this please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103895--vs. aragorn
 
 


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