SPuL vs L.I.
 

Yeah...this will be a hot one....

RULES
10 Lines
No feeding
No biting
No hate votes
No crew votes
No dickriding
Due Friday

Aight goodluck...

i am checkin in......will have this verse dropped later in the week......got lots of shit goin on........goodluck SPuL........

My Verse
 

Okay SPuL....i know we cool...but this is business....

Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...
u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky…
Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…
I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome...
SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(look below to understand)
Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya...
And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta...
C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet...
Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...

So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke...
Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...

ok break down

spul your opener was pretty nice good set up line helped out the punch good opener your closer wass a nice personal but better things for l.i though lol good wording in it to and the rest of your verse had a bunch of personals the aim lingo was pretty soft punch the treason line was sick lmao damn overall i was fealin about half your verse brah tight verse the aim shit is what was your downfall

l.i your opener was nice good wordplay and punch and a concept not used much your closer was nice to good way to point that out that he uses that style way to much and the rest of your verse was nicely worded not so much used concepts and good personals good job of putti nthe convo part in it instead of just sayin the verse nobody would have got it tight verse as well but you get my vote for being more consitent with your personals and punchs i felt

tight battle sons this is why people should battle on there own level shit is actually worth readin and keeps attention

vote l.i no hate either even after i read that aim convo lol

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thanks for the feedback upp

yo this battle was cool i liked both verses but both could of did better
as for spul
You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do
Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you
(it was a decent open i seen better the opening could of hit harder 7/10)
Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh
You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass”
^(AIM Conversation)(ok but why did u tell L.I u were gon' use it what ever 5/10)
“Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me
After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see?
^(His AIM lingo lol)(didnt like it but it was average could been better 6/10)
You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse
The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse
(hahaha this line was funny 8/10)
Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason
Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason'
(this line was a'ight jus could of been better 7/10)
Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that
But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact
(decent ending 7/10)

Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...(i liked the opening 8/10
u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky…
Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…(ha like that one 9/10
I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome...
SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(it was ok not great 6/10
Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya...
And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta...(ha much better than the last line 7/10
C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet...
Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...(liked that one 9/10)
So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke...
Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...(it was decent 7/10
overall i think L.I took this one but in the rules it said no feedin so imma have to vote for spul no beef

Ok, to tell the truth the AIM stuff really isn't doing it for me.. seems like just stretched for personals... I mean people say stupid shit on AIM all the time.. not impressive. Also, the murderous methods = kill your own verse... everyone uses that personal. LI I like the way you flipped that down the left line thing... but I didn't really like it when Spul did it and it's not much better now, only cuz you flipped it.

Basically, this battle came down to the openers, and a couple other lines. Spul takes the opener I think because it was kinda funny, but LI takes it overall because wtf Spul.. how can you call him your bitch when you're paying him. That's whack.

v/ LI

hit up this battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122976

This was a pretty good battle....

Spul came with some pretty good punches but they weren't the best. Some could have been better. Flow was OK but nothing that special........LI had personals coming from every angle. I liked how he flipped the words down the left on him. I don't like it as a punch but since he was flipping it on him, it worked out well. Flow wasn't bad either....

Vote - LI

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thanks for all the feedback.......upping................