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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
SPuL | 4 | 44.44% | |
L.I. | 5 | 55.56% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-11-04, 04:11 PM | #1 | ||||
Miss Me?
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SPuL vs L.I.
IP: D5EA 4189
Yeah...this will be a hot one....
RULES 10 Lines No feeding No biting No hate votes No crew votes No dickriding Due Friday Aight goodluck...
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05-11-04, 04:12 PM | #2 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
i am checkin in......will have this verse dropped later in the week......got lots of shit goin on........goodluck SPuL........
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05-11-04, 08:41 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
checkin' in. Good luck to you too, fool. lol Also, it's 12 lines, not 10. 10 makes the verse weird to me. I
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05-11-04, 09:07 PM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
aiight, here it is:
You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass” ^(AIM Conversation) “Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see? ^(His AIM lingo lol) You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason' Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact aiight, there's my spit. Last edited by SPuL : 05-11-04 at 09:13 PM. Reason: wrong link lol |
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05-11-04, 09:57 PM | #5 | ||||
Miss Me?
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My Verse
IP: D5EA 4189
Okay SPuL....i know we cool...but this is business....
Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs... People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb... u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey… SPuL7988: yo, I got a fuckin' loss. WTF?
I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome...SPuL7988: hol on. I'm pissed off right now. lol Tar UNC Heelz: lol SPuL7988: there goes the streak lol Tar UNC Heelz: lol whod u lose to Tar UNC Heelz: the tag team? SPuL7988: yea lmfao SPuL7988: opened for 7th time Tar UNC Heelz: lol SPuL7988: gotta get it reopened hopefully SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(look below to understand) SPuL7988: I'm gonna use that dumbass
Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya...Tar UNC Heelz: use what SPuL7988: line in our battle lol Tar UNC Heelz: whut line SPuL7988: that "I'm a dumbass" line in our battle And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta... C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat... So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke... Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...
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05-11-04, 10:46 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin' for votes.
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05-11-04, 11:16 PM | #7 | |||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: 8C4C B372
ok break down
spul your opener was pretty nice good set up line helped out the punch good opener your closer wass a nice personal but better things for l.i though lol good wording in it to and the rest of your verse had a bunch of personals the aim lingo was pretty soft punch the treason line was sick lmao damn overall i was fealin about half your verse brah tight verse the aim shit is what was your downfall l.i your opener was nice good wordplay and punch and a concept not used much your closer was nice to good way to point that out that he uses that style way to much and the rest of your verse was nicely worded not so much used concepts and good personals good job of putti nthe convo part in it instead of just sayin the verse nobody would have got it tight verse as well but you get my vote for being more consitent with your personals and punchs i felt tight battle sons this is why people should battle on there own level shit is actually worth readin and keeps attention vote l.i no hate either even after i read that aim convo lol Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes
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05-12-04, 06:15 AM | #8 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
thanks for the feedback upp
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05-12-04, 06:16 AM | #9 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
ok, whatever. uppin'
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05-12-04, 06:42 AM | #10 | |||
Addicted
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IP: 0E6B 425F
yo this battle was cool i liked both verses but both could of did better
as for spul You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you (it was a decent open i seen better the opening could of hit harder 7/10) Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass” ^(AIM Conversation)(ok but why did u tell L.I u were gon' use it what ever 5/10) “Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see? ^(His AIM lingo lol)(didnt like it but it was average could been better 6/10) You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse (hahaha this line was funny 8/10) Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason' (this line was a'ight jus could of been better 7/10) Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact (decent ending 7/10) |
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05-12-04, 06:49 AM | #11 | |||
Addicted
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IP: 0E6B 425F
Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...(i liked the opening 8/10 u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…(ha like that one 9/10 I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome... SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(it was ok not great 6/10 Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya... And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta...(ha much better than the last line 7/10 C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...(liked that one 9/10) So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke... Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...(it was decent 7/10 overall i think L.I took this one but in the rules it said no feedin so imma have to vote for spul no beef |
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05-12-04, 01:31 PM | #12 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Ok, to tell the truth the AIM stuff really isn't doing it for me.. seems like just stretched for personals... I mean people say stupid shit on AIM all the time.. not impressive. Also, the murderous methods = kill your own verse... everyone uses that personal. LI I like the way you flipped that down the left line thing... but I didn't really like it when Spul did it and it's not much better now, only cuz you flipped it.
Basically, this battle came down to the openers, and a couple other lines. Spul takes the opener I think because it was kinda funny, but LI takes it overall because wtf Spul.. how can you call him your bitch when you're paying him. That's whack. v/ LI hit up this battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122976
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05-12-04, 02:31 PM | #13 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
^LMFAO I never even paid him. lol Uppin' for votes.
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05-12-04, 02:58 PM | #14 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: F2D3 41E9
This was a pretty good battle....
Spul came with some pretty good punches but they weren't the best. Some could have been better. Flow was OK but nothing that special........LI had personals coming from every angle. I liked how he flipped the words down the left on him. I don't like it as a punch but since he was flipping it on him, it worked out well. Flow wasn't bad either.... Vote - LI Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes
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05-12-04, 03:45 PM | #15 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
thanks for all the feedback.......upping................
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