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yung duke vs intensify effect
Battle Rules: 5 to 8 bars * u pick the limit.. * No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting DUE by 9:pm i gotta go in a few min, if i drop befor i go u'r verse better be droped 15 min after i do.. *only to make it fair* Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-28-04 at 04:37 PM Must drop verse in 300 minutes after check in. |
Yung Duke has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:10 PM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:15 PM.
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i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me
and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares? plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH |
Dont ever call me a biter, unless you ready to get left in patches,
guess I'm number 13, out of ya 12 already open matches, now come on, this dissin niggaz better than you shit is gettin old, especially when just speakin my name can get you ko'd, and you gone diss the kid, when my name you dont deserve to speak, ya opponents votes is gettin dq'd and they still gettin the clean sweep, ya name even describe this battle, cause my verse is "intense" and yours is frail, now that's the cause, and the "effect" is your goi home wit an L, I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me, only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky, and me and you aint on the same level, our names should be kept on different sectors, now once again a biter? only thing I took a bite out of was ya record... ~Yung Duke~ Explanations: the fourth line was because of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137773 and the sixth line was because of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135569 |
Voted For: Yung Duke
Battle Verse 1 structure is pretty good...flow is good for the most part...no multis...wordplay is pretty weak...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Battle Verse 2 structure is also pretty good...flow is good...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent... Overall both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had decent wordplay...neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had more connecting punches...as well as better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote.. VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 2 Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=137919 |
Voted For: Yung Duke
nice personals nice my vote was cuz of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^ now u really think that wont get dq'd. come on people
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upp'in this battle,
come on dont sleep on my verse people..... |
uppin
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uppin, and aint nobody sleepin on it, it just sucks
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Voted For: intensify effect
Intens- Flow Was Good, Punches Hit, Structure Was Decent, And Some Lines Were Original, Others Not So.... Yung Duke- Flow Was Ok, Punches Were So So...Structure Wasnt Bad...But You Had A Personal Here And There..... Punches- Inten Personals- Yung Flow- Tie Multis- Niether Wordplay- Inten Metaphor- Niether Vocab- Inten Structure- Tie Originality- Yung Final Vote- Inten Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
upp'in............................................ ...
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Voted For: intensify effect
ima have to give this battle to intensity that urkel line jus ended the battle rigth there. His punches were better to Yung duke had a hot finisher too, this battlew as pretty close but the V goes to Intensity http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
intensify effect
i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody Blah doesn't make sense u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards Ok idea, blahza lines, worded wrong why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares? plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs blah dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender 'higher higher'?ha, no which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender your so stupid you can't even spell STUPID! dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH Blah blah Some decent ideas, fell off towards the end.Content was blah, wordplay was so so, no real decent set up to help your punches.& your vocab is horrible, learn how to spell before you go calling someone stupid, supied... geez |
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