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Check in by: 07-28-04 at 04:37 PM

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Yung Duke has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:10 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:15 PM.

i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me
and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody

u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers
its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards

why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares?
plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs

dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender
cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender

which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender
cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender

dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance
just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH

Dont ever call me a biter, unless you ready to get left in patches,
guess I'm number 13, out of ya 12 already open matches,
now come on, this dissin niggaz better than you shit is gettin old,
especially when just speakin my name can get you ko'd,
and you gone diss the kid, when my name you dont deserve to speak,
ya opponents votes is gettin dq'd and they still gettin the clean sweep,
ya name even describe this battle, cause my verse is "intense" and yours is frail,
now that's the cause, and the "effect" is your goi home wit an L,
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
and me and you aint on the same level, our names should be kept on different sectors,
now once again a biter? only thing I took a bite out of was ya record...
~Yung Duke~

Explanations: the fourth line was because of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137773
and the sixth line was because of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135569

Voted For: Yung Duke

Battle Verse 1
structure is pretty good...flow is good for the most part...no multis...wordplay is pretty weak...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is also pretty good...flow is good...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had decent wordplay...neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had more connecting punches...as well as better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote..

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 2

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Voted For: Yung Duke

nice personals nice my vote was cuz of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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^^^ now u really think that wont get dq'd. come on people

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upp'in this battle,

come on dont sleep on my verse people.....

uppin

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Fuck the Record...
Co-Topical leader on the Phase 1 All-Star team.
Member of Udestructable Emcees (Original)
Member of P.S.A (Original)
Member of Trap Lyrics
Member of Blueprint
First ever KO to Spul
K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted)
...The above Proves i'm Fukin Dope

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uppin, and aint nobody sleepin on it, it just sucks

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Fuck the Record...
Co-Topical leader on the Phase 1 All-Star team.
Member of Udestructable Emcees (Original)
Member of P.S.A (Original)
Member of Trap Lyrics
Member of Blueprint
First ever KO to Spul
K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted)
...The above Proves i'm Fukin Dope

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Voted For: intensify effect

Intens- Flow Was Good, Punches Hit, Structure Was Decent, And Some Lines Were Original, Others Not So....

Yung Duke- Flow Was Ok, Punches Were So So...Structure Wasnt Bad...But You Had A Personal Here And There.....

Punches- Inten
Personals- Yung
Flow- Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Inten
Metaphor- Niether
Vocab- Inten
Structure- Tie
Originality- Yung

Final Vote- Inten
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Voted For: intensify effect

ima have to give this battle to intensity that urkel line jus ended the battle rigth there. His punches were better to
Yung duke had a hot finisher too, this battlew as pretty close but the V goes to Intensity
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648

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