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Old 07-29-04, 06:51 PM   #1
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Da Prodigy vs A.M.O.K

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Old 07-29-04, 06:54 PM   #2
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A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 06:54 PM.
 
Old 07-29-04, 06:55 PM   #3
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Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 06:55 PM.
 
Old 07-29-04, 06:56 PM   #4
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Enter A.M.O.K the unearthly, intial contact is deadly
Make a fool of you?Hasn't Jay Z clowned Prodigy already?,
Weren't ready, clearly thought I don't know how to battle
We'll never see 'eye to eye' cause your not on my LEVEL!,
Grovel, beg to get ahead, my lines burst through rhymes
Like I outsprinted a guy w/ my watch, I'm ahead of my time,
Let's rewind, beat me?Crap talk in your raps consistent
Your chances of winning is ZERO like your audio statistics,
Closed coffin bitches, I came, saw, destroyed this nitwit
Can't snatch a win from the Jaws of defeat.. if you in with it,

Bye Bye again....
 
Old 07-29-04, 07:14 PM   #5
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yo/A.M.O.K's bars are small like da condoms he wears...
no complexity 2 his game or da "spit" his tongue bears...
this guys game is like salad...nothin but "fillers" of "herbs"...
just like take out food he always gets "served"...
he's not not uh real rapper..he just wants 2 be like his peers..
what he really wants 2 do is be uh stage dancer 4 brittney spears...

somebody help this rookie...he's needs uh life line...
he didnt mean 2 battle me cuz all his bars are mine...
its 2 late now...its gone be like chess in hell...
except that your the knight an ur takin ur first "L"..(his first loss an thats how knights move in chess)..
i got room 4 one more bar..even though ur in jail already...
u had ur stuff pre written on paper but u just got "ripped" 2 confetti.....
 
Old 07-29-04, 07:21 PM   #6
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uppin dis shit
 
Old 07-29-04, 07:41 PM   #7
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Voted For: A.M.O.K

Amok- Structure Was Good Flow Was Decent And Punches Connected

Da Prod- Structure Also Was Good, Flow Was Good, And Punches Connected But Some Were Played

Punches- Amok
Personals- Da Prod
Flow Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Da Prod
Metaphors- Da Prod
Structure- Amok
Originality- Amok

Final Vote-- Amok
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Old 07-29-04, 08:28 PM   #8
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Uppeth, cause I'm nice
 
Old 07-29-04, 10:02 PM   #9
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Might aswell D'Q this kids vote on my other battle
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Old 07-30-04, 12:46 AM   #10
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Hurry up & vote, I'll get the lastest D12 album for your troubles
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Old 07-30-04, 02:35 AM   #11
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OK OK... no one feeling D12?I'll throw Jada's new LP at chu
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Old 07-30-04, 03:12 AM   #12
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Voted For: A.M.O.K

Da Prodigy
structure is pretty good...flow is on target...no multis...u attempted wordplay, but it was either played or wack...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

A.M.O.K.
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...good personal on his name...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...A.M.O.K. had more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...A.M.O.K. gets my vote...

VOTE - A.M.O.K.

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Old 07-30-04, 02:05 PM   #13
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Uppeth
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Old 07-30-04, 08:46 PM   #14
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Wow... it's sunny, what a nice day to vote
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Old 07-30-04, 08:57 PM   #15
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Voted For: Da Prodigy

daprodigy takes it with more personals stronger punches and a better flow .amok was good but his punches were too weak and it seemed more freestyle while daprodigy sat a little bit and put his toghther better.
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