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Typical vs ..::Sinister::..
Battle Rules:
12 - 32 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting get creative Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-15-04 at 06:27 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Typical DQ'ed for going over line limit |
topical battle ;
slave that escapes his master n heads north |
..::Sinister::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 06:45 PM.
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Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 04:35 PM.
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I can't breathe, its just really too hard to believe, Im runnin for my life, the dogs just been released.. I stop n get quieter, hear steps of one hunderd ppl... Feel blazes of a fire n weapons made way 2 leathal.. I start runnin again cuz they just keep getting closer... Shyt, One jst spotted me, thinkin my lifes already over... They start chasin, sounds like a stampeed of animals... Except they wanna kill me chasin me as if they hanibals I tripped over a little branch, Shyt! I jst cut mah foot U try runnin while limping, all of mah strength it took. I Climb A tall tree, n js wait untill all them pass by As I wait, i think in mah mind of my future great life How unlike before, I could make good memories... Get to live like humans, the life thats ment for me... I move alittle, One guy says "Hey I think I saw him" Shyt and once again I gotta have another problem... I jump down 2 da ground wit out making a sound.. head north where I can count on freedom 2 be found.. Still followed by dogs so need to get rid of my smell.. Jump in mud but its quick-sand I shoulda known well.. I pray for help as the sands already up to my shoulder.. My life passes by my eyes as if i survived n got older... shyt get worst as I see a man in white comin towards me.. But I could tell he ain't bad cuz he dresses so poorely.. Then he takes a rope out and quickly throws it to me... I grab it n he starts pulling out of the sand i start moving Now I know there's a Lord cuz who else coulda helped It ain't a white man cuz they to busy countin their wealth We arrive, I thank him cuz he walked wit me 2 da north I say "thank God" he says "ur welcome" cuz he's the Lord |
I can't breathe, its just really too hard to believe, Im runnin for my life, the dogs just been released.. I stop n get quieter, hear steps of one hunderd ppl... Feel blazes of a fire n weapons made way 2 leathal.. I start runnin again cuz they just keep getting closer... Shyt, One jst spotted me, thinkin my lifes already over... They start chasin, sounds like a stampeed of animals... Except they wanna kill me chasin me as if they hanibals I tripped over a little branch, Shyt! I jst cut mah foot U try runnin while limping, all of mah strength it took. I Climb A tall tree, n js wait untill all them pass by As I wait, i think in mah mind of my future great life How unlike before, I could make good memories... Get to live like humans, the life thats ment for me... I move alittle, One guy says " I think I saw him" Shyt and once again I gotta have another problem... I jump down 2 da ground wit out making a sound.. head north where I can count on freedom 2 be found.. Still followed by dogs so need to get rid of my smell.. Jump in mud but its quick-sand I shoulda known well.. I pray for help as the sands already up to my shoulder.. My life passes by my eyes as if i survived n got older... shyt get worst as I see a man in white comin towards me.. But I could tell he ain't bad cuz he dresses so poorely.. Then he takes a rope out and quickly throws it to me... I grab it n he starts pulling, out of the sand i start moving Now I know there's a Lord cuz who else coulda helped It ain't a white man cuz they to busy countin their wealth We arrive, I thank him cuz he walked wit me 2 da north I say "thank God" he says "ur welcome" cuz he's the Lord |
hope ya'll feelin this.
ayo fuck u master!!.. i refuse to stay/ u no longer have sway, i will not be a slave/ my mind is made, n u will not catch me/ never again will i b under lock latch n key/ yesteday u had me beat cuz i looked u in d eye/ looked thru ur lies... recognized ur disguise i saw tha truth, thru ur blue burnin devilysh eyes/ i saw tha maze of ur hate, u were afraid... of my earth tone heavenly gaze/ that was tha last time i was beatin into mud/ cuz after dat... i could feel tha freedom in my blood/ i leaft that same night, on my life/ i swore, id run thru daylight/ i was once told, i was from a place called afrika/ now... the only place i could see freedom is canada/ so now im runnin wit my feet bleedin/ fast as i can away from tha bleached demon/ id rather these krakers take my life/ then withstand another night of them rapein' my wife/ this isnt tha only method, that i was discussin/ coulda stayed. my cousin met harriet tubman/ but i couldnt stand da government, i was disgusted............... yea yea im no longer in tha masters service/ my wounds run deep, cant be treated by nurses/ so now i feel, like a man wita purpose/ but first i must span tha luissiana purchase/ fuck u n ur laws, i will not worship/ tho im hertin, when i run free i m not worthless... i cant believe it, i been runnin for three days/ i hear them behind me in each state/ i dont care if my feet ache/ im hopin to meet fate/ so with every ounce of my soul/ i ran hard as i could, till i found my goal/ i hope god doesnt forsake me/ let me reach tha gate please/ ...then i passed tha border/ looked back, saw tha patty rollers* comin in order/ they shootin!.. but bullets jus pass n miss me/ KRACKA!.. PICK A SPOT ON MY ASS TO KISS ME!/ cuz u cant do nothin, im in a free domain/ i found nice people, a warm bed, n slept... for three whole days. *patty rollers=a paid slave hunter. they caried some sort of pattle to beat tha slaves with.no bullshit, its true.they r also known as patties. thanx for tha topic sinister. please vote. |
Voted For: Typical
i couldnt get the topic til now and honestly ya coulda picked a better one but sinister made it easy fr me to vote 4 typ. his verse was lackluster, no insult but i wasnt feeling the flow and struc, typ u were more creative but something aint feel right there either, i think it was the topic so next time guys pick a better topic, BUT good shit |
that was hot sin!
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wth?? you hella went over the line limit!!!! lmao, u think cuz it says im new to RB i do'nt know the rules??lmao, you really don't know who i am huh..haha, w/e.. ur already dq'd
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its all about placement. if i wanted i could have shrunk my letters n put a bar in each line. if u want i'll reformate it. if not i dont care who u r.
watta u gonna do dq me! wow! i guess u got tha power than huh big boy? mista "u really dont know who i am". herb! |
its cool.
lets get some votes vrrry hot battle!! |
lmao...yea actually i do.. u jst have no idea who I am..lmao...
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sorry.ur tha man. my apologies
now someone vote please |
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