Battle Rules:

12 - 32 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
get creative

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 06:27 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.


Typical DQ'ed for going over line limit

topical battle ;
slave that escapes his master n heads north

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..::Sinister::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 06:45 PM.

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 04:35 PM.

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hope ya'll feelin this.


ayo
fuck u master!!.. i refuse to stay/
u no longer have sway, i will not be a slave/
my mind is made, n u will not catch me/
never again will i b under lock latch n key/

yesteday u had me beat cuz i looked u in d eye/
looked thru ur lies... recognized ur disguise
i saw tha truth, thru ur blue burnin devilysh eyes/
i saw tha maze of ur hate, u were afraid...
of my earth tone heavenly gaze/

that was tha last time i was beatin into mud/
cuz after dat... i could feel tha freedom in my blood/
i leaft that same night, on my life/
i swore, id run thru daylight/

i was once told, i was from a place called afrika/
now... the only place i could see freedom is canada/
so now im runnin wit my feet bleedin/
fast as i can away from tha bleached demon/
id rather these krakers take my life/
then withstand another night of them rapein' my wife/

this isnt tha only method, that i was discussin/
coulda stayed. my cousin met harriet tubman/
but i couldnt stand da government, i was disgusted...............

yea yea
im no longer in tha masters service/
my wounds run deep, cant be treated by nurses/
so now i feel, like a man wita purpose/
but first i must span tha luissiana purchase/
fuck u n ur laws, i will not worship/
tho im hertin, when i run free i m not worthless...

i cant believe it, i been runnin for three days/
i hear them behind me in each state/
i dont care if my feet ache/
im hopin to meet fate/

so with every ounce of my soul/
i ran hard as i could, till i found my goal/
i hope god doesnt forsake me/
let me reach tha gate please/

...then i passed tha border/
looked back, saw tha patty rollers* comin in order/
they shootin!.. but bullets jus pass n miss me/
KRACKA!.. PICK A SPOT ON MY ASS TO KISS ME!/
cuz u cant do nothin, im in a free domain/
i found nice people, a warm bed, n slept...
for three whole days.

*patty rollers=a paid slave hunter. they caried some sort of pattle to beat tha slaves with.no bullshit, its true.they r also known as patties.

thanx for tha topic sinister.
please vote.

Voted For: Typical

i couldnt get the topic til now and honestly ya coulda picked a better one
but sinister made it easy fr me to vote 4 typ. his verse was lackluster, no insult but i wasnt feeling the flow and struc,
typ u were more creative but something aint feel right there either, i think it was the topic
so next time guys pick a better topic, BUT good shit

that was hot sin!

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wth?? you hella went over the line limit!!!! lmao, u think cuz it says im new to RB i do'nt know the rules??lmao, you really don't know who i am huh..haha, w/e.. ur already dq'd

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its all about placement. if i wanted i could have shrunk my letters n put a bar in each line. if u want i'll reformate it. if not i dont care who u r.
watta u gonna do dq me! wow! i guess u got tha power than huh big boy?
mista "u really dont know who i am".
herb!

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its cool.
lets get some votes vrrry hot battle!!

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lmao...yea actually i do.. u jst have no idea who I am..lmao...

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