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youngtone22 vs newkid
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting battle mane Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-08-04 at 03:43 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
youngtone22 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 03:44 AM.
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Yo, get your storey straight before you step up to the plate
Desecrate with the rhymes I create before you can contemplate Conjugate lyrical forces, you want to talk shit, check your sources I’ve schooled rappers with spiritual courses, the hate of 100 divorces Blast past so fast it won’t even disrupted the bullshit shadow you cast You’ve got flow, but your rhymes are half assed, we don’t even contrast Spiting bullets through your words, you want beef, I kill cattle by the herd It’s almost absurd, in here I’ll make your death look like accident occurred ---Punch line----- We High As Kites, Raining Meteorites I'm Intergalactic, You Want Tactics Shoot You With A 9 Millimeter Automatic, Break Your Back With Chiropractics |
please vote every 1 coz i need some votes to see whus da best
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NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 05:15 AM.
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put tha chrome 2 ya dome n damage ya mind..
wipin off mah shoes iss tha onli way u can shine.. pull ya head out its socket n bury ya spine.. i got a "Punch" line datll leave ya toothless.. u gotta terrible record no wunda ya crewless.. catch a cap 2 tha back of ya head like ya religion was jewish.. u culdnt c mah flow looking threw a radar.. n ya rhymes iz blank juss like ya avatar.. face it ya flow iz wasted raps culdnt change its identity even if u had a face lift.. u culdnt b a head of me if u was seatin n tha front seat.. want beef??nigga u aint readi stick 2 lunch meat.. catch a tool 2 ya "Top" like a sattelite dish.. keep wishin n prayin dat u had it like dis.. u culdnt have "Shit" on tha streets if u was related 2 evicted tenants..i keep ya gurl holdn mah balls like she servin fa tennis..aint no point n battle again cus ya carrier iz finshed |
IP:
youngtone22 ya lil coward ill knock u down like osama did dem towers u made out of shit mane catch me droppin dolla bills on ya bitch mane she suck my dick so hard i wanted to pay hur but she said no charge can i have hur with some fries and a shake extra large run mane run go call yo bodyguards!!! yo is it me or does it look like he made hella change ova night???? maybe sumbodi wrote it 4 him maybe he ripped it off of sumbodi but dis a big difference 4rm tha 1 he just wrote |
Voted For: NewKid
NewKid gets my vote hea... His punches were harder than youngtone22's..and they connected.. tha flow was pretty decent..didnt fall off or nuttin.. and tha structure was decent too.. youngtone22.. yo punches were hard..but not harder than NewKid's..but thats me tho.. tha flow on ur verse was nice.. structure was good..didnt stretched all~out or nuttin and wordplay was ok... overall..NewKid won this becuz his punches came harder than youngtone22's.... |
Voted For: NewKid
i like this niggas verse better that other shit was kinda wack mayn u gotta check it plus i hur that shit from sumbody else before nigga u bitting Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: NewKid
Vote: NewKid Lyrics: yungtone Multies: yungtun Wordplay:newkid Structure: newkid Punches:newkid flow: tied Overall: yungtun u shud b pnching all da way through not at end and to top it the line werent even dat good |
Voted For: youngtone22
young took it ... newkid u had him in the first verse, but then you fell off what happened? meta,personals,punches,lyrics,words// young structure//newkid vote//youngtone22 |
Voted For: NewKid
had tighter punch lines and had a tight flow i give it to this dued right here cuss his shit was tight the punch llines are just tight |
Voted For: youngtone22
the vocab was way better in this song flow was off tho flow newkid vocab young punches young metas no one multis young v/youngtone22 return the favour in my battle vs liven legend the link is in my sig thanks peace |
Voted For: NewKid
dis nigga got more flow then youngtone but i'ma break it down like dis Flow - NewKid Vocab - Youngtone Wordplay - NewKid Structure - NewKid Punchlines - NewKid but youngtone got nice shit 2 so big up`z ta both |
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