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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 03:43 AM

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youngtone22 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 03:44 AM.

Yo, get your storey straight before you step up to the plate
Desecrate with the rhymes I create before you can contemplate
Conjugate lyrical forces, you want to talk shit, check your sources
I’ve schooled rappers with spiritual courses, the hate of 100 divorces
Blast past so fast it won’t even disrupted the bullshit shadow you cast
You’ve got flow, but your rhymes are half assed, we don’t even contrast
Spiting bullets through your words, you want beef, I kill cattle by the herd
It’s almost absurd, in here I’ll make your death look like accident occurred
---Punch line-----
We High As Kites, Raining Meteorites I'm Intergalactic, You Want Tactics
Shoot You With A 9 Millimeter Automatic, Break Your Back With Chiropractics

please vote every 1 coz i need some votes to see whus da best

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 05:15 AM.

put tha chrome 2 ya dome n damage ya mind..
wipin off mah shoes iss tha onli way u can shine..
pull ya head out its socket n bury ya spine..
i got a "Punch" line datll leave ya toothless..
u gotta terrible record no wunda ya crewless..
catch a cap 2 tha back of ya head like ya religion was jewish..

u culdnt c mah flow looking threw a radar..
n ya rhymes iz blank juss like ya avatar..
face it ya flow iz wasted raps culdnt change
its identity even if u had a face lift..

u culdnt b a head of me if u was seatin n tha front seat..
want beef??nigga u aint readi stick 2 lunch meat..
catch a tool 2 ya "Top" like a sattelite dish..
keep wishin n prayin dat u had it like dis..


u culdnt have "Shit" on tha streets if u was related 2 evicted tenants..i keep ya gurl holdn mah balls like she servin fa tennis..aint no point n battle again cus ya carrier iz finshed

IP:
youngtone22

ya lil coward ill knock u down like osama did dem towers u made out of shit mane catch me droppin dolla bills on ya bitch mane she suck my dick so hard i wanted to pay hur but she said no charge can i have hur with some fries and a shake extra large run mane run go call yo bodyguards!!!

yo is it me or does it look like he made hella change ova night???? maybe sumbodi wrote it 4 him maybe he ripped it off of sumbodi but dis a big difference 4rm tha 1 he just wrote

Voted For: NewKid

NewKid gets my vote hea...
His punches were harder than youngtone22's..and they connected..
tha flow was pretty decent..didnt fall off or nuttin..
and tha structure was decent too..

youngtone22..
yo punches were hard..but not harder than NewKid's..but thats me tho..
tha flow on ur verse was nice..
structure was good..didnt stretched all~out or nuttin
and wordplay was ok...

overall..NewKid won this becuz his punches came harder than youngtone22's....

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Voted For: NewKid

i like this niggas verse better that other shit was kinda wack mayn u gotta check it plus i hur that shit from sumbody else before nigga u bitting

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Voted For: NewKid

Vote: NewKid

Lyrics: yungtone
Multies: yungtun
Wordplay:newkid
Structure: newkid
Punches:newkid
flow: tied

Overall: yungtun u shud b pnching all da way through not at end and to top it the line werent even dat good

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Voted For: youngtone22

young took it ... newkid u had him in the first verse, but then you fell off what happened?

meta,personals,punches,lyrics,words// young

structure//newkid

vote//youngtone22

Voted For: NewKid

had tighter punch lines and had a tight flow i give it to this dued right here cuss his shit was tight the punch llines are just tight

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Voted For: youngtone22

the vocab was way better in this song flow was off tho
flow newkid
vocab young
punches young
metas no one
multis young
v/youngtone22

return the favour in my battle vs liven legend the link is in my sig thanks peace