Lil diss
 

Yo this is a diss dedicated for people that i hate

This reminds me of a porn movie hardocore version
Merking your ass up is easy as fucking up a virgin
I''ll be ill and give you 101 lesson by testin your creation
Dont forget this''imagination is your first source of inspiration''
Even with feedback you still just done understand how to rap
So stop rapping and start sucking in gay porn movie,youll be loving
Atleas youll be good in something,its not my fault...so no hating,

Yo someone here wanna help me out whit my punchlines and wordplay and vocad and EVERYTHING! Yo if you have msn and wanna help me just PM me please...i really want to elevate

Peace

Yo come on give feedback to this!

yah feedback please!

you have improved since your last drop..
you have better rhyme's, structure and flow,
nice drop.
keep elevating

yeah man nice drop was on point def improved some
return the feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160856
peace~1

yah thanks alot people

u need to drop more bars then that....
i dont know if u improve or not so i aint gonna say shit about that...

but drop more bars then that dogs but it was aight... 7.5 outta 10...

uppinn.........

Drop Was Cool.kinda Short Tho'.from Wat I See Ur Vocab Is Decent.7/10.............keep Em Comin'

Nice drop man, good to see you better than when I brought you, lol.

I think you'd prolly do better on audio, or at least it seems that way.

yah thanks man...cant wait till we collab...anyway thanks too everyone

yeah your getting better than your last one... keep writin' man... that's all you gotta do.

7.234 outta 10.

7.234 lol thanks

Okay people i just had Cool edit 2 and i wanted to try it...so i did it with this song...so check it out

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/xspittymusic.htm

...........3/10.......... wasnt feeling it