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11-16-04, 07:44 PM
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Hell yeah
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Lil diss
IP: 024D F234
Yo this is a diss dedicated for people that i hate
This reminds me of a porn movie hardocore version Merking your ass up is easy as fucking up a virgin I''ll be ill and give you 101 lesson by testin your creation Dont forget this''imagination is your first source of inspiration'' Even with feedback you still just done understand how to rap So stop rapping and start sucking in gay porn movie,youll be loving Atleas youll be good in something,its not my fault...so no hating, Yo someone here wanna help me out whit my punchlines and wordplay and vocad and EVERYTHING! Yo if you have msn and wanna help me just PM me please...i really want to elevate Peace |
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11-17-04, 06:07 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
Yo come on give feedback to this!
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11-17-04, 09:07 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
yah feedback please!
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11-17-04, 09:12 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
you have improved since your last drop..
you have better rhyme's, structure and flow, nice drop. keep elevating |
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11-18-04, 12:32 AM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
yeah man nice drop was on point def improved some
return the feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160856 peace~1
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11-18-04, 07:30 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
yah thanks alot people
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11-18-04, 01:55 PM
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Banned
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IP: F2A1 41C4
u need to drop more bars then that....
i dont know if u improve or not so i aint gonna say shit about that... but drop more bars then that dogs but it was aight... 7.5 outta 10... |
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11-18-04, 05:09 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F5E3 549A
uppinn.........
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11-18-04, 05:13 PM
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IP: E31B AA42
Drop Was Cool.kinda Short Tho'.from Wat I See Ur Vocab Is Decent.7/10.............keep Em Comin'
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-18-04, 08:48 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Nice drop man, good to see you better than when I brought you, lol.
I think you'd prolly do better on audio, or at least it seems that way.
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11-18-04, 11:13 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
yah thanks man...cant wait till we collab...anyway thanks too everyone
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11-19-04, 02:37 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 9A07 1297
yeah your getting better than your last one... keep writin' man... that's all you gotta do.
7.234 outta 10.
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11-19-04, 03:34 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
7.234 lol thanks
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11-20-04, 03:18 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 4D11 25CD
Okay people i just had Cool edit 2 and i wanted to try it...so i did it with this song...so check it out
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11-20-04, 04:06 AM
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CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP: D078 09F0
...........3/10.......... wasnt feeling it
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