young_buckshot vs ULTIMATE SPY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 05:08 PM

Must drop verse in 1140 minutes after check in.

ULTIMATE SPY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 04:24 PM.

young_buckshot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 04:30 PM.

i gotta sikk vendetta,ull feel tha beretta
be mezmerized by my werdz,cause i ryme betta..
flip tha shit u say and put it too good use...
u can try to be a rapper but yer more like footloose..
man u take to long,u got till tommorow to drop...
by then i could be in jail,or gone choppin rocz...
man yer rymes about to flop,get stomped in my reeboks...
ya come up in rv ,to try to be an m.c....
there gonna see shits fake like pamala lee....

this kid drops rhymes like he dope,he aint jus look at his post
only thing hes good at is he droppin the bar of soap
bends over take its hard , tell'n his bitch to "never let go"
my rhymes hit you hard like a ton of bricks
i seen more spine in a fuck'n jelly fish
your a lil to young to be play'n wit guns
this kid so dumb lights bombs n forgets 2 run
check out this cats rec 3 n 8
bonified retard..don't need to mention he southern raised
couldnt argue even if was head of debate
shoulda been part of the infant mortality rate
your physiological state bout to deflate
junior light weight your emotional state
is what we all know you can't handle or take

one prime

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

this was an 1-sided battle all the way thru out:
opener: ultimate spy
vocab: u.s
structure: both
multis: u.s
closer: u.s
u.s just came harder in this battle & hit wit more punches; yun buckshot u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

This was feedback posted for young_buckshot
 

Just checkin the polls

An your opening line reminded me of 50 cent on 'How We Do'

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

US:

I felt that your verse was better overall. your disses hit harder and so did your personal disses. not very complex though, but i felt that u had a little bit of everything and accomplished the object of dissing someone better than ybs did.

ybs:

i felt that you complimented yourself and said how "thug" u were more than diss US. try dissing him more and keeping the complimenting to a minimum.

i voted for ultimate spy due to him actually dissing ybs.

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

i dunno wut to even say in this one...just elevate yall.
i gave my vote to US, because he came harder wit punches, and i think that wut everybody prolly guna say. yo structure...work on that fam, lines were stretched, and seemed unfinished. thats tha only thing that u did wrong in this. but i was feelin yo punches...thats it...oh, and some, some, some mettas..but, still kinda not too good...
YBuck. u had a not so good verse. work on structure too. and yo punches didnt land like they should have. they were nice, but yo wordplay fucked them all up. i think u should elevate a lot fam. u gave him an easy win...no hate tho...

overall- this was a onesided battle, but still elevate, and u will be at tha top of RV soon..work on ur structure first, thats everything in text...well, a huge part...

plz RTF on battle link...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177888
cause i took my time out to vote on this, and plz make it explained,cause i explained this....

~1~

thanks yea 1st battle i'ma work'n ...upp'n dis shit .....................lets get this closed

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

Y.B. verse started off on some 50CENT shyt, you gotta be original man...and ya punchez were madd weak kyd...work on ya punchez, then you should work on throwing in multies in it...

SPY, that "dropping a BAR of soap" line beat his entire verse cuz of the werdplay/metaphor...the bomb line was nyce too...LMAO @ infant mortality rate...you take this without any questions or quabs...

upppp'n thx for da votes.................uppppppppn...

Voted For: young_buckshot

Lol @ Thiss Kid Startin Off With 50 Cent Verse.............

Vote Removed

its koo how do i take that vote off? message strobe?