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young_buckshot | 0 | 0% | |
ULTIMATE SPY | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-19-05, 04:23 PM | #1 | |
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young_buckshot vs ULTIMATE SPY
IP: CF4E 8780
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6 - 16lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-19-05 at 05:08 PM Must drop verse in 1140 minutes after check in. |
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02-19-05, 04:24 PM | #2 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
ULTIMATE SPY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 04:24 PM.
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02-19-05, 04:30 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 9818 67C1
young_buckshot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 04:30 PM.
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02-19-05, 04:47 PM | #4 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 9818 67C1
i gotta sikk vendetta,ull feel tha beretta
be mezmerized by my werdz,cause i ryme betta.. flip tha shit u say and put it too good use... u can try to be a rapper but yer more like footloose.. man u take to long,u got till tommorow to drop... by then i could be in jail,or gone choppin rocz... man yer rymes about to flop,get stomped in my reeboks... ya come up in rv ,to try to be an m.c.... there gonna see shits fake like pamala lee....
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02-19-05, 05:30 PM | #5 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
this kid drops rhymes like he dope,he aint jus look at his post
only thing hes good at is he droppin the bar of soap bends over take its hard , tell'n his bitch to "never let go" my rhymes hit you hard like a ton of bricks i seen more spine in a fuck'n jelly fish your a lil to young to be play'n wit guns this kid so dumb lights bombs n forgets 2 run check out this cats rec 3 n 8 bonified retard..don't need to mention he southern raised couldnt argue even if was head of debate shoulda been part of the infant mortality rate your physiological state bout to deflate junior light weight your emotional state is what we all know you can't handle or take one prime
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02-19-05, 06:10 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
this was an 1-sided battle all the way thru out: opener: ultimate spy vocab: u.s structure: both multis: u.s closer: u.s u.s just came harder in this battle & hit wit more punches; yun buckshot u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes no hating make sure 2 return the favor |
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02-19-05, 06:12 PM | #7 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for young_buckshot
IP: C62D 353D
Just checkin the polls
An your opening line reminded me of 50 cent on 'How We Do'
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02-19-05, 06:43 PM | #8 |
This is my first post!
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IP: 4EC7 0981
Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
US: I felt that your verse was better overall. your disses hit harder and so did your personal disses. not very complex though, but i felt that u had a little bit of everything and accomplished the object of dissing someone better than ybs did. ybs: i felt that you complimented yourself and said how "thug" u were more than diss US. try dissing him more and keeping the complimenting to a minimum. i voted for ultimate spy due to him actually dissing ybs. |
02-19-05, 06:51 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
i dunno wut to even say in this one...just elevate yall. i gave my vote to US, because he came harder wit punches, and i think that wut everybody prolly guna say. yo structure...work on that fam, lines were stretched, and seemed unfinished. thats tha only thing that u did wrong in this. but i was feelin yo punches...thats it...oh, and some, some, some mettas..but, still kinda not too good... YBuck. u had a not so good verse. work on structure too. and yo punches didnt land like they should have. they were nice, but yo wordplay fucked them all up. i think u should elevate a lot fam. u gave him an easy win...no hate tho... overall- this was a onesided battle, but still elevate, and u will be at tha top of RV soon..work on ur structure first, thats everything in text...well, a huge part... plz RTF on battle link... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177888 cause i took my time out to vote on this, and plz make it explained,cause i explained this.... ~1~ |
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02-19-05, 07:30 PM | #10 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
thanks yea 1st battle i'ma work'n ...upp'n dis shit .....................lets get this closed
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Â-balam balam i treat yall like cans of spam Free Time... I Live the Lifestyle You Want to Live Secret Society/Cut Throat |
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02-19-05, 07:42 PM | #11 | |
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 85C0 F54B
Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
Y.B. verse started off on some 50CENT shyt, you gotta be original man...and ya punchez were madd weak kyd...work on ya punchez, then you should work on throwing in multies in it... SPY, that "dropping a BAR of soap" line beat his entire verse cuz of the werdplay/metaphor...the bomb line was nyce too...LMAO @ infant mortality rate...you take this without any questions or quabs... |
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02-19-05, 08:31 PM | #12 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
upppp'n thx for da votes.................uppppppppn...
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Â-balam balam i treat yall like cans of spam Free Time... I Live the Lifestyle You Want to Live Secret Society/Cut Throat |
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02-19-05, 08:45 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 3A12 DEDD
Voted For: young_buckshot
Lol @ Thiss Kid Startin Off With 50 Cent Verse............. Vote Removed
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02-19-05, 08:45 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 3A12 DEDD
Mih Bad Meant Ta Hit Feedbacc......
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02-19-05, 08:54 PM | #15 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
its koo how do i take that vote off? message strobe?
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