MjGrEeN vs Buck.Shot
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-25-05 at 05:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 05:45 PM.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 05:50 PM.

Why you think they call this kid 'MJ-Green?'
Eyes like a ''Frog''.. trynna type rhymes ''Glued ta the Screen''
So peachy-keen too get his Verse Correct
Even ya ''Ghost''writer was labelled an ''Unidentified Object''
Flows like a ''Collect-Call'' Causing ''No Charges''
If ya wanna ''Cum-Hard'' Try 'Penis Enlargers!'
Ya lack Skill, Creativity, Wit, Among many Other Things
Cause ya come ''Softer'' than the ''Titties'' ya Mother-Brings


Explanation:
Mike Jackson has eyes like a frog, the rest you can work it out

Good luck GREEN, No Hate, An honest well explained Votes Will Be Returned

I've been gone for a while, but it feels too long ago,
You take tips from 8 mile and end up as 'no show'
'Buck.Shot', change your name to 'Fuck Slot'
Cuz gays spend to fuck your ass alot
I'm a weapon, your dead, one stab of the knife,
I murked you so bad i thought i'd take your life
Was like 'Jerry Springer' cuz over me your mom and sis were fighting
You've been knocked out so bad ass look like it got hit by 'Lightning'

I been gone for a few months and felt a bit rusty, hopefully was ok tho...

Rusty Error sorry posted wrong box, here is

I've been gone for a while, but it feels too long ago,
You take tips from 8 mile and end up as 'no show'
'Buck.Shot', change your name to 'Fuck Slot'
Cuz gays spend to fuck your ass alot
I'm a weapon, your dead, one stab of the knife,
I murked you so bad i thought i'd take your life
Was like 'Jerry Springer' cuz over me your mom and sis were fighting
You've been knocked out so bad ass look like it got hit by 'Lightning'

Uppin y'all..........................................

Uppin y'all.................

Drop a link an we will both RTF with an honest vote

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!4 votes...

uppin............................................. ..........

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

id love to vote on this one but i dont got my post counts so heres some feed:

STYLE:
buck's drop was more dramatic and carried more creative wording

PUNCH:
if MjGrEeN maintained quality punches after the first 4 lines, u woulda had the edge man

FLOW:
good flow here by both, but again MjGrEeN u kiLLed urself in the end, the last 2 lines i feel were stretched, which couldve been avoided by throwin in some multis... Buck has a consistent flow

TECHNIQUE:
Mj, u could use some work on vocab, single syllabled wording thru out ur drop made it seem like last minute work, both should try and work on making ur 1-2 lines a whole, instead of throwing in any given line, and arbitrarily finding a word that just rhymes with the ending word from before

S: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
P: =tiE=
F: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
T: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
OVERALL: no hard punches, no major crowd pleasers, need improvement on working past the surface meaning of words
VOTE: i cant! but wouldve been Buck.Shot

Uppin or votes, thanx for the feed, it was just a quick drop i have flowed alot better then this, i hope lol
uppin tho.......

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: Buck.Shot

good battle kinda buckshot better flow better ryme scheme nicer structure and way easier to follow funny lines man that shits killin me