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Buck.Shot | 5 | 100.00% | |
MjGrEeN | 0 | 0% | |
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02-22-05, 05:44 PM | #1 | |
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MjGrEeN vs Buck.Shot
IP: 0A85 F1D0
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02-22-05, 05:45 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 05:45 PM.
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02-22-05, 05:50 PM | #3 | |
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IP: B1A5 868C
Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 05:50 PM.
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02-22-05, 06:03 PM | #4 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: B1A5 868C
Why you think they call this kid 'MJ-Green?'
Eyes like a ''Frog''.. trynna type rhymes ''Glued ta the Screen'' So peachy-keen too get his Verse Correct Even ya ''Ghost''writer was labelled an ''Unidentified Object'' Flows like a ''Collect-Call'' Causing ''No Charges'' If ya wanna ''Cum-Hard'' Try 'Penis Enlargers!' Ya lack Skill, Creativity, Wit, Among many Other Things Cause ya come ''Softer'' than the ''Titties'' ya Mother-Brings Explanation: Mike Jackson has eyes like a frog, the rest you can work it out Good luck GREEN, No Hate, An honest well explained Votes Will Be Returned
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02-22-05, 06:06 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
I've been gone for a while, but it feels too long ago,
You take tips from 8 mile and end up as 'no show' 'Buck.Shot', change your name to 'Fuck Slot' Cuz gays spend to fuck your ass alot I'm a weapon, your dead, one stab of the knife, I murked you so bad i thought i'd take your life Was like 'Jerry Springer' cuz over me your mom and sis were fighting You've been knocked out so bad ass look like it got hit by 'Lightning'
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02-22-05, 06:07 PM | #6 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
I been gone for a few months and felt a bit rusty, hopefully was ok tho...
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02-22-05, 06:09 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
Rusty Error sorry posted wrong box, here is
I've been gone for a while, but it feels too long ago, You take tips from 8 mile and end up as 'no show' 'Buck.Shot', change your name to 'Fuck Slot' Cuz gays spend to fuck your ass alot I'm a weapon, your dead, one stab of the knife, I murked you so bad i thought i'd take your life Was like 'Jerry Springer' cuz over me your mom and sis were fighting You've been knocked out so bad ass look like it got hit by 'Lightning'
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02-22-05, 07:19 PM | #8 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Uppin y'all..........................................
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02-23-05, 10:18 AM | #9 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Uppin y'all.................
Drop a link an we will both RTF with an honest vote
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02-23-05, 01:11 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!4 votes...
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02-24-05, 12:19 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
uppin............................................. ..........
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02-24-05, 12:57 PM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
IP: 1D02 B26F
id love to vote on this one but i dont got my post counts so heres some feed:
STYLE: buck's drop was more dramatic and carried more creative wording PUNCH: if MjGrEeN maintained quality punches after the first 4 lines, u woulda had the edge man FLOW: good flow here by both, but again MjGrEeN u kiLLed urself in the end, the last 2 lines i feel were stretched, which couldve been avoided by throwin in some multis... Buck has a consistent flow TECHNIQUE: Mj, u could use some work on vocab, single syllabled wording thru out ur drop made it seem like last minute work, both should try and work on making ur 1-2 lines a whole, instead of throwing in any given line, and arbitrarily finding a word that just rhymes with the ending word from before S: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN P: =tiE= F: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN T: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN OVERALL: no hard punches, no major crowd pleasers, need improvement on working past the surface meaning of words VOTE: i cant! but wouldve been Buck.Shot
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02-25-05, 10:39 AM | #13 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Uppin or votes, thanx for the feed, it was just a quick drop i have flowed alot better then this, i hope lol
uppin tho.......
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02-25-05, 10:12 PM | #14 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
uppin............................................. ....
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02-25-05, 11:37 PM | #15 | |
im INFINITE bitches
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IP: 65BD FAB5
Voted For: Buck.Shot
good battle kinda buckshot better flow better ryme scheme nicer structure and way easier to follow funny lines man that shits killin me
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