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Hoe Luv (verse & hook)...its been a minute yall
guess who's back?...its muthafuckin Doe Bagz BITCH!...Emerican Movement...get down or get laid down hoes...what now??? *real pimp beat starts* [verse 1] u must have me totally and literally twisted trick thinkin dat i gotta hoe and i trust tha bitch afta she gave "lawinski' and "sucked my dick" and i put babies all ova her black dress and shit? nigga please, imma playboi, i aint married tha only ring i got is tha one dat my left ear carries u got me confused wit tha othas, man im not tied down but i can act a clown when me and a chick lay down shit im a pimp like "don quan" wit my green on plus i got gold condoms for "xxx" tha "sex storm" aint shit changed, i still hustle to feed my son and he a pimp too, he got hoes, more than one and he only one but he do what he do, be who he is its nothin, he aint frontin when its comes to dis shit so raise ya glass at dis playaz ball and pop ya colla its tha emerican nigga from detroit makin dollaz (oh!) [hook] u got me fucked up, thinkin i love a hoe i'll fuck a hoe, but i neva loved a hoe cuz lovin a hoe is wrong, it'll neva be right and like dre said, u cant turn a hoe into a wife -repeat 2x- yeah...a lil sample for yall...more to come 4real niggaz...EF Movement bitches...fuck wit us...and if dis is weak...so what...i neva rap like dis anyway...DB is back at it! |
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Damn Dis Was Sum Hot Shit As Usual
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thanx fam...uppin dis rite here
-DB |
Decent flow, wasnt really feelin the hook all that much
but the verse was solid, some aight metas an wordplay, keep doin it big Doe, i know how you do... we still gotta collab, we aint never collabed, an nobody do it like us on this open mic shit... hit up my O.M'z wit some feedback, ''I Thought You Knew'' & ''So-Low'' |
Dis was iight homie da flow was on da wordplay was good its some solid shit had some good metas in there......da hook wasnt all dat good but da hook dont really matta.....i give it a overall of 7.8/10.....~1~
RTF heres da link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187445 |
yo this was a decent piece keep it up yo....had some good vocab good flow and that..not wack like the rest of open mic is becoming..lol..keep it up yo..7/10
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uppin for my homie DB..lets get some feed flowin
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yeah, not bad, little basic, but still had some cool lines...i enjoyed cause it flowed nicely...keep up yo
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thanx alot yall...and PM me for dat collab teph...uppin
-DB |
i would like to up this now
-DB |
dis sum nice work man...known topic but creative way of rappin...multis, flow, structure were all there...nice shit homie...8/10...1
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ya this wasn't ur best...i've heard better...but you were prolly just foolin around
this is my favourite line...lol "aint shit changed, i still hustle to feed my son and he a pimp too, he got hoes, more than one" ya...ur son's a pimp and he's one...werd...lol |
was feeling this, nice hook flowed really well nd nice worddplay and shit, i liked
nigga please, imma playboi, i aint married tha only ring i got is tha one dat my left ear carries and a couple of others, nice shit. |
thanx yall...and i was jus playin around...uppin dis yall!
-DB |
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